You have an idea, that is huge and you can turn it into novella. I liked the story line, title of story, name of characters and your treatment.
THANK YOU :)
amazing!!! I liked the simplicity of the story, keep it up.
Thank you, amitsaini :)
Extremely good short story...
Thanks for encouraging me to write more, Ruhani :)
nicely penned down...It was so natural and simple in its way... keep writing:)
Thank you indeed :)
Nice story and interesting read :)