You have an idea, that is huge and you can turn it into novella. I liked the story line, title of story, name of characters and your treatment. Thanks

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THANK YOU :)

amazing!!! I liked the simplicity of the story, keep it up.

Thank you, amitsaini :)

Extremely good short story...

Thanks for encouraging me to write more, Ruhani :)

nicely penned down...It was so natural and simple in its way... keep writing:)

Thank you indeed :)

Nice story and interesting read :)