nice

hllo

NICE STORY!!

I wanted to read this story because it promises much! This is the first story I have read here. As the main character admits, his writing shills need work, I feel Jagrit's skills will improve... by paying attention to detail. I'm waiting for Pat Two... to

gud 1.... waiting for 2nd part

Really nice. I actually felt myself as the prisoner. And I imagined the Himalayas, 4 months of winter. Cant wait for the next part!

ohh good one. It will make me come to the site again and again ... to get the next delight. :)

hummm... So now I have to keep reading all the stories till the next part comes!!! A total Ekta Kapoor drama where people keeps wondering "Is Mihir real dead! or will he come back!" Nice, inspirational story... Awaiting the next one to come up... All t

nice concept. very well written..

we hardly get to read such stuff.. good detailing and style of explaining... can't wait for its sequel..

Very nicely written.. good start and will wait for the next part..