Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream.

Adventure | 23rd Jan 2018|6 min read

Jagrit

I have been framed for my neighbor's murder and have been sentenced to seven years in prison.


LEAVE YOUR REVIEW

1500/1500  

Recommendations

REVIEWS

  • AJ Vosse

    12th Oct

    I wanted to read this story because it promises much! This is the first story I have read here. As the main character admits, his writing shills need work, I feel Jagrit's skills will improve... by paying attention to detail. I'm waiting for Pat Two... to

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Jagrit

    26th Sep

    Test

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Ruhani

    21st Feb

    gud 1.... waiting for 2nd part

    Upvote | 1
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 21st Feb

    i am also waiting

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Jaspreet

    23rd Nov

    Hey Jagrit, Apologies for the same! Idea was not to compare it with a family drama but to mention the curiosity which lasts when the ending line says "to be continued..." which no one has done better then her (pick any of her series)!

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 23rd Nov

    Hey .. you shd not compare such a story with Ekta Kapoor ,, saas bahu dramas.

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Jagrit

    23rd Nov

    Jassi I cant believe you compared a hollywood style writing with Ekta kapoor's drama.. But still happy that you like it... will publish it very soon... Thanks for appreciating... When is your story coming?

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 27th Aug

    Really nice. I actually felt myself as the prisoner. And I imagined the Himalayas, 4 months of winter. Cant wait for the next part!

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 23rd Nov

    ohh good one. It will make me come to the site again and again ... to get the next delight. :)

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Jaspreet

    22nd Nov

    hummm... So now I have to keep reading all the stories till the next part comes!!! A total Ekta Kapoor drama where people keeps wondering "Is Mihir real dead! or will he come back!" Nice, inspirational story... Awaiting the next one to come up... All t

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 19th Nov

    nice concept. very well written..

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 19th Nov

    we hardly get to read such stuff.. good detailing and style of explaining... can't wait for its sequel..

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • 19th Nov

    Very nicely written.. good start and will wait for the next part..

    Upvote | 0
    Downvote
    Reply
  • Show More