Eddy thats a very nice story.. and very well written too... Just confused on one part.. In second last paragraph was it intentional of you to reveal the death of the old man, as written "On the day when old man Rusty died". If yes, then why?
Thats a nice one Jassi, it seems we have good authors all around us.. Just instead of Roger, Rohit would have been better.
Another point you ended the story very soon, could have elaborated it. It was very interesting story.
Jassi I cant believe you compared a hollywood style writing with Ekta kapoor's drama.. But still happy that you like it... will publish it very soon... Thanks for appreciating... When is your story coming?