gud 1.... waiting for 2nd part
nicely penned down... :)
I took a lot of time to read this story as it was quite longest among ur other stories.. but again nicely penned down... i enjoy reading ur wrk:)
of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the story.. Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)
nicely penned down...It was so natural and simple in its way... keep writing:)
According to me, the beginning shouldn't be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.
hey Sallymohsen, actually any story before publishing goes to the editor of the website for a review and if your story qualify the rules, it will surely get publish.
What i wanted to say above is if this story would have had a positive ending, it would have lost its excitement and effectiveness.
Yup, u r absolutely right that depressing endings are not such a bad thing. And I took ur story in a vry positive way rather than getting depressed. It was an excellent story, thts too of my taste...:)
well thank you for appreciating... I couldnt find your story.. hope to see it soon... good luck:)
Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!
Hey Eddywalker, really appreciate the way u start up ur stories nd then end up so differently.... Amazing piece of work... Though it was little depressing in the end, and could have simply concluded in a positive note; but i must say u made it much more e
Wow!!! This is really an awesome romantic story.. It perfectly depicted the heartbroken lover with deep pain and fear of separation lies in his true love.... Good one:)
thanx guys... I appreciate ur comments...:)
a nice nd little touchy too as it reminded me of my childhood days whn ma grandma used to make awesum stuff with her sewing. Sumtimes i used to put my nose inside it, the moment she move here nd der for sum other work. Evn I tried my hands on few things..
I am just speechless as how to compliment on this story... A wonderful piece of work.. really impressed the way u described each and every moment inside it... a nice love story with a beautiful ending.
thts a nice story but little sad too... Especially the ending was little depressive but too gud. In the whole script i felt like jumping inside nd rescue the person... Suspense made me curious all d time as wht next.... Keep writing!!!!
i absolutely liked it... especially the way u described every moments nd situations. I could easily visualize the whole drama. keep up:)
lovely story with a good ending.... It remind me of a movie 'adam', the person having no emotions and his life. No doubt ur story is much better than that too... keep it up:)
Hey that's an amazing piece of work, a fantastic script... I have lesser words to explain, may be one among the best stories of this website... There is a deep meaning hidden inside the humor... I really got touched by few line which goes-"I went to bed o
Hey dude,nicely penned down though could have been better in the end.I liked it.
Ahhh... amazing work.. I felt in between as if i was myself present in the scenes.. perfectly described.. the mystery and suspense made me curious all the time as whats the next gonna happen... Interesting one!!!
nicely penned down
thanx...i got it:)
Hey, your story is amazing... I loved the way u described nd illustrated the situation aroung Sisyohus... it made me contemplate every moment as whats gonna next...though once in between the story i felt that u stretched it little longer... but wonderful
Hey George, dis is a different story. I admire ur wrk.. I was little confused in between the story though it seemed to be interesting. Can u please summarize it in 2 -3 lines. Thanks
wow!!! very adorable and charming story.... It was very constant all the way through and very thorough for a short story.... Thanx for writing:)
I felt as if I was watching the incident myself only..as it was so nicely described as could easily visualize... though the tragedy made me feel sad... but good wrk dear...
Excellent way to create an environment of suspense and describe the situation and surroundings around the character... a good story
Good story. Thanks I got a big smile while reading it... simply liked the way u ended up..
haehehe....good 1... liked it,just the kind of stuff m interested in- humor.. keep comeing..
ahhhh.... u scared me... good work..:)
a sweet story... i like the way the story got its end...
its a nice moral lesson as how we can control our anger that is the biggest enemy of a man. nice story Dilip..:)
I really appreciate the way you described the character and the surroundings... liked it completely and could easily picturize it...
Ahhhh.... an awesome story... i won't mind saying that one of the best stories i really liked... beautifullll... and especially the end part of it.. Also the title is too good and appropriate...:)... love to read your stories...keep writing!!!
hey Barun, again a good story... keep it up
you are welcome Aubreegrace.... ll wait for your next story ans surely gv my viewpoints... Evn m going to write a story soon... lets see hw its come...
amazing story. have penned down vry nicely and differently... every moment and situation was framed so perfectly that i felt like m watching some movie... gud wrk...
beautiful story Barun... very impressive ... I really liked the way u wind up ur story...touching:)
Wonderfully written, like all of your stories....keep it up
AWwwwwww!!!! what a story....u are an amazing writer...keep up the good work...
amazing story... really scary and too emotional... :)
Again nice story... but ended up very soon... wanted to read more to have more fun.... :)
Nice story dear.... simply loved the way u tried to put up the emotions and the feelings. It luked so natural... and vry delicately u hav given a soft twist to the story from happiness to tragedy..... keep it up.... All the best for further stories
Nice story Aseem... In the beginning it reminded me of bombay blasts in train many years bck... liked the supense maintained in entire story. Also when story took a twist that now Retesh will be released from jail, gave mea moment of relief but than end u
beautiful story with hidden deep meaning... :).. It was easy to conceptualize it as described very simply... :)
Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)
Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....
Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!
hey thanx dear... :)
Thanx Robby...:)when is ur next story coming???
thanx Anikhet.. I am waiting for your story too...:)
Hey Arebbela, i really liked the way u maintained the suspense throughout the story. the way each nd every moment has been described is phinominal. !!!
WOW!!! a wonderful story...simply liked the way you have described the characters and the situation around. The suspense and the horror made me eager and keen the whole moment as whats gonna happen next.Ended up with a affirmative note. in short, I enjoye
Very nice story Jass... u have penned down in very simple words....The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss....:)
hmmmm.... i agree... :)))))..Luv u jassss:)
heheheheh..... Jass I knew it that Jagrit will surely write you that please dont compare my international level story with Ekta kapoors serial...hehehe.... he just hate her and her supers!!!! haaaahaaaa... I cant control laughing....:)))))))))))))
Thanx Jai...I wish u get it...I Knw ultimately what would you like to get>>>>Golden hair Princess....lol...heheheh
Is it from Your novel 'Love was never mine' ???
Lovely story Kunal Sir... made me little emotional at the end... :)
thanx Dhawal… i ll write some more such stories to keep u in touch with your Sweet Purani yaadein….:)
hey thanx Geeta:)
thanks jaspreet for appriciation and valuable suggestion...ll do it surely:)
what a story Kunal Sir... simple and impressive....:)