Ruhani

delhi ,India

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  • Ruhani Feb 21st2018
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream.

    Jagrit Jan 23rd2018

    16Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 18 Comments

    gud 1.... waiting for 2nd part

  • Ruhani Jan 30th2018
    MURALS OF AN UNWRITTEN POEM

    Akarsha Kamala Jan 15th2018

    6Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Drama | 1 Comments

    nice one

  • Ruhani Sep 18th2012
    Food

    starpurple Jan 16th2018

    3Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 2 Comments

    nicely penned down... :)

  • Ruhani Apr 21st2012
    The Spider and the Fly

    geedda Jan 16th2018

    8Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 3 Comments

    I took a lot of time to read this story as it was quite longest among ur other stories.. but again nicely penned down... i enjoy reading ur wrk:)

  • Ruhani Apr 21st2012
    Wonder If?

    geedda Apr 2nd2012

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Inspirational | 4 Comments

    of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the story.. Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)

  • Ruhani Apr 11th2012
    My Life in the bush of Fear

    Jan 15th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 11 Comments

    nicely penned down...It was so natural and simple in its way... keep writing:)

  • Ruhani Apr 4th2012
    Dane's Steer

    loril Mar 28th2012

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Inspirational | 7 Comments

    According to me, the beginning shouldn't be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.

  • Ruhani Apr 1st2012
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    hey Sallymohsen, actually any story before publishing goes to the editor of the website for a review and if your story qualify the rules, it will surely get publish.

  • Ruhani Apr 1st2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    What i wanted to say above is if this story would have had a positive ending, it would have lost its excitement and effectiveness.

  • Ruhani Apr 1st2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    Yup, u r absolutely right that depressing endings are not such a bad thing. And I took ur story in a vry positive way rather than getting depressed. It was an excellent story, thts too of my taste...:)

  • Ruhani Apr 1st2012
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    well thank you for appreciating... I couldnt find your story.. hope to see it soon... good luck:)

  • Ruhani Apr 1st2012
    Dane's Steer

    loril Mar 28th2012

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Inspirational | 7 Comments

    Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!

  • Ruhani Mar 31st2012
    The Arrange Marriage

    eddywalker Jan 21st2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 17 Comments

    Hey Eddywalker, really appreciate the way u start up ur stories nd then end up so differently.... Amazing piece of work... Though it was little depressing in the end, and could have simply concluded in a positive note; but i must say u made it much more e

  • Ruhani Mar 31st2012
    The Figure

    alolam Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 2 Comments

    Wow!!! This is really an awesome romantic story.. It perfectly depicted the heartbroken lover with deep pain and fear of separation lies in his true love.... Good one:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st2012
    The Man and the little boy

    Ruhani Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    thanx:)

  • Ruhani Mar 31st2012
    The Man and the little boy

    Ruhani Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    thanx George....:)

  • Ruhani Mar 28th2012
    The Man and the little boy

    Ruhani Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    thanx guys... I appreciate ur comments...:)

  • Ruhani Mar 20th2012
    One White Rose

    Sherry Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 3 Comments

    a nice nd little touchy too as it reminded me of my childhood days whn ma grandma used to make awesum stuff with her sewing. Sumtimes i used to put my nose inside it, the moment she move here nd der for sum other work. Evn I tried my hands on few things..

  • Ruhani Mar 15th2012
    [email protected] SBS

    Pankaj.Priyadarshi Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 20 Comments

    I am just speechless as how to compliment on this story... A wonderful piece of work.. really impressed the way u described each and every moment inside it... a nice love story with a beautiful ending.

  • Ruhani Mar 4th2012
    Please Don't Murder Me

    illustrated18 Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 4 Comments

    thts a nice story but little sad too... Especially the ending was little depressive but too gud. In the whole script i felt like jumping inside nd rescue the person... Suspense made me curious all d time as wht next.... Keep writing!!!!

  • Ruhani Mar 4th2012
    Georgina

    Raymond Jan 15th2018

    4Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Comedy | 2 Comments

    i absolutely liked it... especially the way u described every moments nd situations. I could easily visualize the whole drama. keep up:)

  • Ruhani Mar 2nd2012
    The Terrible

    qlstrange Jan 15th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Bedtime | 2 Comments

    lovely story with a good ending.... It remind me of a movie 'adam', the person having no emotions and his life. No doubt ur story is much better than that too... keep it up:)

  • Ruhani Feb 25th2012
    Look at Me Now

    geedda Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 4 Comments

    Hey that's an amazing piece of work, a fantastic script... I have lesser words to explain, may be one among the best stories of this website... There is a deep meaning hidden inside the humor... I really got touched by few line which goes-"I went to bed o

  • Ruhani Feb 20th2012
    The Monarchs

    solbek1 Jan 16th2018

    8Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 4 Comments

    Hey dude,nicely penned down though could have been better in the end.I liked it.

  • Ruhani Feb 20th2012
    The Diary Of Ruth Hill

    Tammy Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 8 Comments

    Ahhh... amazing work.. I felt in between as if i was myself present in the scenes.. perfectly described.. the mystery and suspense made me curious all the time as whats the next gonna happen... Interesting one!!!

  • Ruhani Feb 19th2012
    Chicken or Egg?

    Anish Jan 16th2018

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 4 Comments

    nicely penned down

  • Ruhani Feb 17th2012
    The Petulant Prophet

    geedda Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 6 Comments

    thanx...i got it:)

  • Ruhani Feb 17th2012
    Sisyphus

    TheScribbler Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 6 Comments

    Hey, your story is amazing... I loved the way u described nd illustrated the situation aroung Sisyohus... it made me contemplate every moment as whats gonna next...though once in between the story i felt that u stretched it little longer... but wonderful

  • Ruhani Feb 16th2012
    The Petulant Prophet

    geedda Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 6 Comments

    Hey George, dis is a different story. I admire ur wrk.. I was little confused in between the story though it seemed to be interesting. Can u please summarize it in 2 -3 lines. Thanks

  • Ruhani Feb 10th2012
    Little Do We Know

    fencingtypists Jan 16th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 3 Comments

    wow!!! very adorable and charming story.... It was very constant all the way through and very thorough for a short story.... Thanx for writing:)

  • Ruhani Feb 9th2012
    The Moment That Never Happend

    nightofminutes Jan 16th2018

    8Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 4 Comments

    I felt as if I was watching the incident myself only..as it was so nicely described as could easily visualize... though the tragedy made me feel sad... but good wrk dear...

  • Ruhani Feb 6th2012
    Edward and the Imp

    Sherry Jan 15th2018

    6Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Comedy | 6 Comments

    Excellent way to create an environment of suspense and describe the situation and surroundings around the character... a good story

  • Ruhani Feb 5th2012
    The Night Disco Died

    geedda Jan 16th2018

    5Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 6 Comments

    Good story. Thanks I got a big smile while reading it... simply liked the way u ended up..

  • Ruhani Feb 4th2012
    Bad Rubbish

    Raymond Jan 15th2018

    6Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Children | 5 Comments

    haehehe....good 1... liked it,just the kind of stuff m interested in- humor.. keep comeing..

  • Ruhani Feb 3rd2012
    The Christmas Sweater

    Patrick Jan 16th2018

    5Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 5 Comments

    ahhhh.... u scared me... good work..:)

  • Ruhani Feb 3rd2012
    A Winter's Tale

    Sherry Jan 16th2018

    6Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 7 Comments

    a sweet story... i like the way the story got its end...

  • Ruhani Jan 28th2012
    Notice Things, They Change You

    weseektheomissions Jan 16th2018

    8Votes, average: 3 out 5
    Others | 7 Comments

    Nice story...

  • Ruhani Jan 26th2012
    The witch and the devil

    Gabriela Jan 15th2018

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Bedtime | 8 Comments

    Good Story...:)

  • Ruhani Jan 23rd2012
    Nail The Fence

    dilipnahak Jan 22nd2012

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Inspirational | 7 Comments

    its a nice moral lesson as how we can control our anger that is the biggest enemy of a man. nice story Dilip..:)

  • Ruhani Jan 22nd2012
    Into Darkness

    Sherry Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 7 Comments

    I really appreciate the way you described the character and the surroundings... liked it completely and could easily picturize it...

  • Ruhani Jan 21st2012
    Women Through The Centuries

    babettesmuse Jan 15th2018

    7Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 7 Comments

    nice story

  • Ruhani Jan 20th2012
    The second paragraph

    barun Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 11 Comments

    Ahhhh.... an awesome story... i won't mind saying that one of the best stories i really liked... beautifullll... and especially the end part of it.. Also the title is too good and appropriate...:)... love to read your stories...keep writing!!!

  • Ruhani Jan 19th2012
    A time to say goodbye

    barun Jan 16th2018

    9Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 6 Comments

    hey Barun, again a good story... keep it up

  • Ruhani Jan 19th2012
    Midnight Rose

    aubreegrace Jan 22nd2018

    22Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 27 Comments

    you are welcome Aubreegrace.... ll wait for your next story ans surely gv my viewpoints... Evn m going to write a story soon... lets see hw its come...

  • Ruhani Jan 18th2012
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx Aubreegrace....

  • Ruhani Jan 18th2012
    Midnight Rose

    aubreegrace Jan 22nd2018

    22Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 27 Comments

    amazing story. have penned down vry nicely and differently... every moment and situation was framed so perfectly that i felt like m watching some movie... gud wrk...

  • Ruhani Dec 25th2011
    Father and son

    barun Jan 16th2018

    20Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 12 Comments

    beautiful story Barun... very impressive ... I really liked the way u wind up ur story...touching:)

  • Ruhani Dec 23rd2011
    joint session 2

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 7 Comments

    Wonderfully written, like all of your stories....keep it up

  • Ruhani Dec 23rd2011
    the way to hell

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    14Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Horror | 10 Comments

    AWwwwwww!!!! what a story....u are an amazing writer...keep up the good work...

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    Echo Lake

    jgrover15 Dec 15th2011

    10Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Mystery | 5 Comments

    amazing story... really scary and too emotional... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    Ghosts don't exist

    eddywalker Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 5 out 5
    Horror | 7 Comments

    Again nice story... but ended up very soon... wanted to read more to have more fun.... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    In Another Life

    irishgirl Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 14 Comments

    superlikeee!!!

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    In Another Life

    irishgirl Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 14 Comments

    Superlikeee!!!!

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    In Another Life

    irishgirl Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 14 Comments

    Nice story dear.... simply loved the way u tried to put up the emotions and the feelings. It luked so natural... and vry delicately u hav given a soft twist to the story from happiness to tragedy..... keep it up.... All the best for further stories

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    The night that was!

    aseemrastogi2 Jan 19th2018

    11Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 10 Comments

    Nice story Aseem... In the beginning it reminded me of bombay blasts in train many years bck... liked the supense maintained in entire story. Also when story took a twist that now Retesh will be released from jail, gave mea moment of relief but than end u

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    the attic

    eddywalker Jan 16th2018

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Tragedy | 7 Comments

    beautiful story with hidden deep meaning... :).. It was easy to conceptualize it as described very simply... :)

  • Ruhani Dec 19th2011
    The Chronology of a Broken Trust

    sonalpandey Jan 16th2018

    32Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 24 Comments

    Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)

  • Ruhani Dec 13th2011
    The Ashes Of GETORA

    Divyansh Jan 23rd2018

    15Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Mystery | 14 Comments

    Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....

  • Ruhani Nov 28th2011
    Living with Lake

    Jaspreet Jan 22nd2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 17 Comments

    Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!

  • Ruhani Nov 26th2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    hey thanx dear... :)

  • Ruhani Nov 26th2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    Thanx Robby...:)when is ur next story coming???

  • Ruhani Nov 26th2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx Anikhet.. I am waiting for your story too...:)

  • Ruhani Nov 26th2011
    The Art of Disposal

    arabella808 Nov 25th2011

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Mystery | 6 Comments

    Hey Arebbela, i really liked the way u maintained the suspense throughout the story. the way each nd every moment has been described is phinominal. !!!

  • Ruhani Nov 24th2011
    Black Day

    Priyanka Jan 24th2018

    15Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Fiction | 10 Comments

    WOW!!! a wonderful story...simply liked the way you have described the characters and the situation around. The suspense and the horror made me eager and keen the whole moment as whats gonna happen next.Ended up with a affirmative note. in short, I enjoye

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    God: The Ultimate POWER…

    Jaspreet Jan 16th2018

    13Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Others | 24 Comments

    Very nice story Jass... u have penned down in very simple words....The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss....:)

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx dear:)

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream.

    Jagrit Jan 23rd2018

    16Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 18 Comments

    hmmmm.... i agree... :)))))..Luv u jassss:)

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    Prison Break: Part 1: First two years and a distant dream.

    Jagrit Jan 23rd2018

    16Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 18 Comments

    heheheheh..... Jass I knew it that Jagrit will surely write you that please dont compare my international level story with Ekta kapoors serial...hehehe.... he just hate her and her supers!!!! haaaahaaaa... I cant control laughing....:)))))))))))))

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    Thanx Jai...I wish u get it...I Knw ultimately what would you like to get>>>>Golden hair Princess....lol...heheheh

  • Ruhani Nov 23rd2011
    Priceless Pearls...Few pages from my diary...

    Kunal Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 14 Comments

    Is it from Your novel 'Love was never mine' ???

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    Priceless Pearls...Few pages from my diary...

    Kunal Jan 16th2018

    12Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Romance | 14 Comments

    Lovely story Kunal Sir... made me little emotional at the end... :)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx Dhawal… i ll write some more such stories to keep u in touch with your Sweet Purani yaadein….:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    hey thanx Geeta:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx Soniya

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanks jaspreet for appriciation and valuable suggestion...ll do it surely:)

  • Ruhani Nov 22nd2011
    Firensheep Day

    Kunal Nov 20th2011

    10Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Drama | 13 Comments

    what a story Kunal Sir... simple and impressive....:)

  • Ruhani Nov 21st2011
    The Prince and his magical possessions

    Ruhani Jan 16th2018

    28Votes, average: 4 out 5
    Adventure | 35 Comments

    thanx guys..:)

Ruhani