Yup, u r absolutely right that depressing endings are not such a bad thing. And I took ur story in a vry positive way rather than getting depressed. It was an excellent story, thts too of my taste...:)
Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!
Hey Eddywalker, really appreciate the way u start up ur stories nd then end up so differently.... Amazing piece of work... Though it was little depressing in the end, and could have simply concluded in a positive note; but i must say u made it much more e
a nice nd little touchy too as it reminded me of my childhood days whn ma grandma used to make awesum stuff with her sewing. Sumtimes i used to put my nose inside it, the moment she move here nd der for sum other work. Evn I tried my hands on few things..
I am just speechless as how to compliment on this story... A wonderful piece of work.. really impressed the way u described each and every moment inside it... a nice love story with a beautiful ending.
thts a nice story but little sad too... Especially the ending was little depressive but too gud. In the whole script i felt like jumping inside nd rescue the person... Suspense made me curious all d time as wht next.... Keep writing!!!!
Hey that's an amazing piece of work, a fantastic script... I have lesser words to explain, may be one among the best stories of this website... There is a deep meaning hidden inside the humor... I really got touched by few line which goes-"I went to bed o
Ahhh... amazing work.. I felt in between as if i was myself present in the scenes.. perfectly described.. the mystery and suspense made me curious all the time as whats the next gonna happen... Interesting one!!!
Hey, your story is amazing... I loved the way u described nd illustrated the situation aroung Sisyohus... it made me contemplate every moment as whats gonna next...though once in between the story i felt that u stretched it little longer... but wonderful
Ahhhh.... an awesome story... i won't mind saying that one of the best stories i really liked... beautifullll... and especially the end part of it.. Also the title is too good and appropriate...:)... love to read your stories...keep writing!!!
Nice story dear.... simply loved the way u tried to put up the emotions and the feelings. It luked so natural... and vry delicately u hav given a soft twist to the story from happiness to tragedy..... keep it up.... All the best for further stories
Nice story Aseem... In the beginning it reminded me of bombay blasts in train many years bck... liked the supense maintained in entire story. Also when story took a twist that now Retesh will be released from jail, gave mea moment of relief but than end u
Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....
Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!
WOW!!! a wonderful story...simply liked the way you have described the characters and the situation around. The suspense and the horror made me eager and keen the whole moment as whats gonna happen next.Ended up with a affirmative note. in short, I enjoye
Very nice story Jass... u have penned down in very simple words....The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss....:)
heheheheh..... Jass I knew it that Jagrit will surely write you that please dont compare my international level story with Ekta kapoors serial...hehehe.... he just hate her and her supers!!!! haaaahaaaa... I cant control laughing....:)))))))))))))