Really good read, high energy and total chaos make this crazy daydream of prose entrancing, like looking at something out of the corner of your eye that you KNOW you shouldn't be looking at but just....can't....help....it... Like an acid trip through fact

of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the story.. Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)

heheheh,gud one,jolly sarcastism!!!

I appreciate your effort but I've heard most of these one-liners before. Don't think it works for a short story... A bit too long to keep my interest.

A great sense of humour and wonderful imaginary script:) good job Mr. George