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of course, the various wanderings in ur above wrk made me smile through out the story.. Hw beautifully u hav drafted dis scrip:)
heheheh,gud one,jolly sarcastism!!!
I appreciate your effort but I've heard most of these one-liners before. Don't think it works for a short story... A bit too long to keep my interest.
A great sense of humour and wonderful imaginary script:) good job Mr. George