The ghost of the past... tormenting the future!
It was a good story and also very scary.
Is it true story ? Where is this house situated in Chamba, Himachal Pradesh.
Interesting story but too many grammar errors to read smoothly, get some editing assistance.
A different, but spooky story. Good job Rehani...George
good work.. I really like the simplicity with which its written... good Job Ruhani..
thanx guys... I appreciate ur comments...:)
Brilliant, the best short story i have ever read :)
Nothing I haven't read before. The detail and suspense need to be there to make it something different and new.