After losing his family, Bret finds peace by the lake in his village, and maybe a chance to be happy again.
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Hi Goldi di,
Such a nice story. kidhar se laate ho itne thoughts!!!
Cool and A touchy story .....good work "Jaspreet "...keep writing...:)
Your story surely had a good base and clearly you visualised it well in your head.
But I hope you welcome some constructive feedback.
I wish you had given your story for proof-reading, coz I couldn't help noticing a few spelling/typo
once again great post story very nice..........i read it very good content, and beautiful story.......
A touchy story,nicely elaborated...It reminds me of Sukhna lake in Chandigarh where I Used to spend a lot of time sitting there whenever I used to feel little down or even happy....:)
I respect the way you took critisism in your stride.
Keep up the confidence.
Looking forward to your next story.
God Bless :)
Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!
Thank you for your feedback, however I m writing stories only as hobby and not as professional. Typo errors are bound to happen, for example it has happened in your case in spelling of “readers”! However, I appreciate your keen observation a
good job,very nice nd intresting story............keep it up.........:)