Nice one.

Hi Goldi di, Such a nice story. kidhar se laate ho itne thoughts!!!

Cool and A touchy story .....good work "Jaspreet "...keep writing...:)

Hi Jaspreet. Your story surely had a good base and clearly you visualised it well in your head. But I hope you welcome some constructive feedback. I wish you had given your story for proof-reading, coz I couldn't help noticing a few spelling/typo

once again great post story very nice..........i read it very good content, and beautiful story.......

nice story..

A touchy story,nicely elaborated...It reminds me of Sukhna lake in Chandigarh where I Used to spend a lot of time sitting there whenever I used to feel little down or even happy....:)

Superlikeee!!!!! what a story jaspreet.. Impressed!!!... whole story is beautifully pennned down. i could felt myself inside all the scenes and the moments. The lake, forest , house evrything I pictured so perfectly... ultimate story....!!!!!!

good job,very nice nd intresting story............keep it up.........:)