Living with Lake

Fiction | Nov 26, 2011 | 6 min read
13 Votes, average: 4 out of 5

Living with Lake

After losing his family, Bret finds peace by the lake in his village, and maybe a chance to be happy again.

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Aug 30, 2012

Hi Goldi di, Such a nice story. kidhar se laate ho itne thoughts!!!

Dec 8, 2011

Cool and A touchy story .....good work "Jaspreet "...keep writing...:)

Dec 6, 2011

Hi Jaspreet. Your story surely had a good base and clearly you visualised it well in your head. But I hope you welcome some constructive feedback. I wish you had given your story for proof-reading, coz I couldn't help noticing a few spelling/typo

Dec 1, 2011

once again great post story very nice..........i read it very good content, and beautiful story.......

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