Good effort "Jaspreet"...i like it very much

Its a nice story.. if you would have given a different title (some scary one) could have made a different impact altogether...

Demonitisation...lol

Good work jass...really enjyng...

It is very interesting story and very surprisingly. Well done jaspreet keep it up. I am waiting your next story. I hope, you will post your next story quickly.

gud job. well done, nice story.

Truly Said - GOD has the ultimate power ... nicely written. Good work

Good Work Jaspreet... Keep the good work coming up.. :)

Nice story Jaspreet.... I like reading true horror stuff... Keep it up:)

Very nice story Jass... u have penned down in very simple words....The end of story surprised me with a twist of suspense. It reminded me of a true incident happened in my relations. Good Show Jasss....:)

Nice effort Jassi! Horror story me thodaa aur horror punches dene the naa.... :-)

Thats a nice one Jassi, it seems we have good authors all around us.. Just instead of Roger, Rohit would have been better. Another point you ended the story very soon, could have elaborated it. It was very interesting story.