I love it. Am sure all kids feel this way all the time.

liked this story, sorry it wouldn't let me post properly first time.

I like the story, simple but powerful;

The flow of the story is a bit choppy to read.

Very nice ????

nice

Lovely, the story is so innocent.

Interesting!!!

Your story is very nice.????

Good story

its really good , keep it up

I love this

It's lovely.

Mummy love to see smile on her daughter face, but daddy want her busy

Cute story. Nice job!

Winning daddy or mommy is so satisying. So the ending is satisfying. Very relatable story. Enjoyed reading it. The funniest part was trying to mesmerize mummy by kisses. Loved your story! Some typos here and there, if you re- read, you can find out for su

Such is nice poetic..