Great Story! :)

Hey friends, thanks for read! I realy tried to translate in a way that I would preserve the sense of this tale. Maybe some parts have been confuse because there are too many details and the original story is in Portuguese. I used characters of the legends

Good story i like it ......:)

Lovely.... :)

i really like this story

Nice one

Good Story...:)

Somehow I felt that the story could have been much better...thought it started well.... Nways a good attempt...:)