nice...!!...lolzzzz

Thank you all for your comments. It is encouraging to me. I appreciate your taking time to read my story. May God bless your day, each one of you...George

Good story. Thanks I got a big smile while reading it... simply liked the way u ended up..

a nice story with a good moral and different storytelling... I wish i would have attended one of Belshazzar's party....hehehehe... on the other side, the humor was little hidden behind the scenes, could have emphasized more... Nwyas i liked it...

beautiful story . I like it.........

Love it George, right up my street. I like to rewrite some of the Old Testament stories but as puppet scripts. Keep up the good work.