Loved it!

A great story, sorry but I cannot offer very much constructive criticism seeing as you are a much better writer than I am. So I'll just write compliments. I liked the way you described the scenery, the amount of excruciating detail you put into describing

A good story!!!

Hey, your story is amazing... I loved the way u described nd illustrated the situation aroung Sisyohus... it made me contemplate every moment as whats gonna next...though once in between the story i felt that u stretched it little longer... but wonderful

I simply loved the title of the story; a great ending too.great imaginary vision; Loved it.

I liked it.Just the kind of stuff i'm interested in!!!!keep writing.