Adventure

Day Trippers

What happened when Dan and Susan reached an abandoned and old church? How did the day become a nightmare for them? Let us find out here.

Sep 18, 2013 | 12 min read

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PAUL PURNELL

Mar 26, 2020

ell! I was enjoying it but the d/load is not integrated and repetitive.What a pity! A few spelling mistakes e.g franticlly and odd phrase but the story works and well done( as far as I can read!

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Titu

Jan 30, 2017

Good

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Barry.Murphy

Oct 18, 2013

Thanks Ekta glad you liked it.

Sep 24, 2013

good one

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