Dane's Steer

Inspirational | 28th Mar 2012|6 min read

loril


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  • jls685

    13th Apr

    Hey great story Mrs. Leavitt, it actually made me tear up a little bit this time. I think you have whittled it down to the point where it is just right. If it can emotionally effect me then it must be something powerful indeed aye?

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  • Ruhani

    4th Apr

    According to me, the beginning shouldn't be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.

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  • geedda

    1st Apr

    Excellent story, I too was touched by its ending...Great job

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  • Ruhani

    1st Apr

    Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!

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  • 31st Mar

    I read all story very good.. Good job Mr. loril

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