Dane's Steer

Inspirational | Mar 28, 2012 | 6 min read
9 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Inspirational

Dane's Steer

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jls685 Apr 13, 2012

Hey great story Mrs. Leavitt, it actually made me tear up a little bit this time. I think you have whittled it down to the point where it is just right. If it can emotionally effect me then it must be something powerful indeed aye?

Ruhani Apr 4, 2012

According to me, the beginning shouldn't be altered as it is creating an ambiance which is the best way to start with any story, nd u have done it nicely.

geedda Apr 1, 2012

Excellent story, I too was touched by its ending...Great job

Ruhani Apr 1, 2012

Thats indeed an interesting writing and have a very different storyline. No doubt, It made me little emotional too in the end. I would like to appreciate your style and approach of describing the whole event. Great story!!!!

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