very nice story.. i really enjoyed this

Its a nice story. I completely got involved while reading it, its really nice :)

Its really a fantastic story. i like it.

You have a great imagination, but a great imagination can over look the simple basics of writing. Wether there is a word defining what I'm about to say, I do not know. But never the less, here it is. The word "Antax" you understand what it is and what it