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The Saviour

my English is very broken but that's what makes my story perfect. Paula is a little girl from a village where she is always trying to help people but....

Mar 9, 2025  |   2 min read

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The Saviour
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Last night I went to sleep and after few minutes my cat laid down next to me purring, his purring helped me to fall asleep.

Everything started with a little girl that was tired of the different type of people that she needs to interact everyday, there were the idiots, the ones that lack of common sense, the ones that pretend to be "nice", the useless, among others.

This little girl was called Paula, and she was living on a village of 100 people, people that I already mentioned above. anyway Paula was living with her mom and with her evil stepfather, Paula was always going around the village trying to find someone to save or help, despite her not being very friendly, she was always up to help anyone in need. Paula's mother was very controlling trying to check all the time what Paula was doing, but Paula was very sneaky and always got rid of her mother easily. on the other hand Paula's stepfather was a men who was always pretending to be "nice" with everyone, he was always shining on the village with everyone "helping", but at home he was evil, and by evil I mean evil. he used to come home and hit Paula and her mother for no reason every day.

Paula started filling up a lot of rage in her heart and wanted to take revenge of him but she need it a good plan as this men was very smart and always found out Paula's clear intentions.

One day Paula came back from walking around the village and found her mom on the floor unconscious Paula tried to wake her up but she didn't respond, Paula loved her mom even though she was very controlling, Paula took a knife from the kitchen and went straight her stepfather back when he turned and hold Paula's hand saying "good try, you are the next one", the stepfather took the knife and Paula was very agile and ran away.......

To be continued....

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