Romance

The Rose of Boston

Feb 23, 2012 | 8 min read

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Mar 27, 2017

duskbrood: I got stuck on the first paragraph with 'her her' which told me you may not have proofed this piece as carefully as you should have. That being said, I thought the first paragaph has great potential in setting the scene. I took the liberty of

Feb 28, 2012

Nice...!!

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