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  • duskbrood Feb 25th2012
    Do you love me?

    lulu123 Jan 16th2018

    8Votes, average: 3 out 5
    Romance | 5 Comments

    Ok, this is a good start. A short little thing like this is how all good stories get going. That said, the reader needs a lot more if they're going to feel invested in this couple. Just a few suggestions: - Expound a lot more on their relationship before

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