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The price to power

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Jan 29, 2025  |   4 min read

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The streets of Tijuana were never kind. The scent of dust, gasoline, and sweat mixed in the air as Javier walked through the crowded market, watching vendors shout their prices, mothers pulling their children close, and young men leaning against walls, whispering deals that could cost a life. He knew these streets better than anyone - he had grown up here, watching, learning, surviving.

His father, a mechanic, had worked tirelessly to put food on the table, but hard work meant nothing in a world ruled by fear and power. When Javier was ten, his father was gunned down in front of their home. A debt unpaid. A warning. His mother had screamed, clutching the lifeless body, and in that moment, Javier learned a lesson that would shape his life: there was no justice, only strength.

By fifteen, he had already stolen, lied, and fought for scraps. His friends, boys who had once dreamed of becoming something more, had either vanished, fallen to addiction, or joined the cartel. It was inevitable. There was no future outside of it. The cartel didn't just own the city - it was the city. The cops? Paid off. The politicians? Puppets. The people? Either afraid or complicit.

It was desperation that led him to his first crime. His mother's illness had worsened, and there was no money for medicine. A childhood friend, Luis, who now worked for a mid-level enforcer, offered him a way out. "One job," he had said. "Just drive. You don't even have to do anything."

That night, with trembling hands, he gripped the steering wheel as two men stepped out of the car, disappeared into a house, and returned minutes later with blood-stained clothes and a duffel bag of cash. The weight in his chest never left him, but neither did the money. It paid for his mother's medicine, for food, for a life he had never imagined possible.

But one job was never just one job.

H?ctor, a ruthless lieutenant in the cartel, saw potential in him. He liked that Javier didn't hesitate when given an order. He liked that Javier was willing to do what others wouldn't. It started with small tasks - delivering messages, collecting debts - but quickly escalated. A gun in his hand. A name on a piece of paper. The first time he pulled the trigger, he felt sick, but he didn't stop.

Loyalty was currency in the cartel, but power was everything.

By twenty-three, Javier was H?ctor's right hand. Money, women, respect - it was all his. He had long abandoned any hope of leaving. He had made his choice the night he first stepped into that car. There was no turning back. The deeper he went, the more he lost - his childhood, his mother, his friends. One by one, they disappeared, some to graves, others to betrayal.

But he had power. And wasn't that what mattered?

When the time came, when H?ctor grew weak, Javier did what needed to be done. A bullet to the back of the head. The same way his father had died. The same way so many had before him. And just like that, he was king. The most powerful man in the organization.

But power was lonely.

Sitting in a dimly lit room, surrounded by luxury, he stared at his reflection in the glass of his whiskey. His hands, once those of a boy desperate for a better life, were now stained with the blood of countless men.

Had it been worth it?

The streets of Tijuana whispered his name in fear. He had everything he had ever wanted.

And yet, he had nothing.

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