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The Last Candle: A Life Extinguished Too Soon

A young girl, Amara, sacrifices everything to save her ailing mother, only to fall into the clutches of a deceitful merchant. Trapped in a life of servitude, she fights for freedom as hope fades. When her mother risks everything to save her, tragedy strikes, leaving Amara to face a world that has stolen nearly everything—except the promise she made to never let her light be extinguished.

Feb 5, 2025  |   6 min read

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Offor Amobi
The Last Candle: A Life Extinguished Too Soon
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The oil lamp flickered, casting long, trembling shadows across the tiny room. Amara sat cross-legged on the threadbare mat, her fingers tracing the edge of her mother's worn shawl. Outside, the wind howled through the narrow streets of the village, rattling loose shutters and whispering secrets only the night could understand.

She had always known struggle, but she had never feared it. Life, as fragile as it seemed, had always found a way to persist. Like the candle on their wooden table, swaying but never extinguishing - until it did.

Her mother, Leila, coughed, a deep, rattling sound that made Amara's heart clench. The sound had become familiar in recent weeks, a haunting reminder of the sickness that had taken hold.

"Amara," her mother rasped, reaching for her daughter's hand. "You must promise me something."

"Anything, Mama."

"Promise me that no matter what happens, you will never let the world steal your light."

Amara swallowed the lump in her throat. She was only sixteen, but the weight of responsibility pressed upon her shoulders like an iron chain.

"I promise," she whispered.

Her mother smiled weakly and squeezed her fingers before another coughing fit took over. Amara rushed to fetch the herbal tonic they could barely afford, wishing she could do more.

Her mind drifted to dreams she dared not voice aloud - of leaving their village, of finding a better life, of escaping the suffocating grip of poverty. But for now, her only wish was for her mother to get well.

As the candle flickered once more, Amara prayed the light would last just a little longer.

The morning sun painted the horizon in soft hues of orange and pink, but Amara barely noticed. She sat beside her mother's bed, pressing a damp cloth against her fevered forehead.

"Did you sleep at all, child?" Leila asked weakly.

Amara forced a smile. "A little."

Leila's eyes held knowing sadness. "You should not wear yourself down for my sake."

"But you always did for me," Amara replied, brushing away a stray lock of hair from her mother's face.

Leila's lips curved in a faint smile. "That is what mothers do."

The sound of the village awakening filtered through the open window. Merchants calling their wares, children laughing as they ran barefoot through the dirt paths, the occasional clatter of pots from nearby homes. Life went on, even when theirs seemed to be standing still.

Amara knew their savings were nearly gone. She had taken to working odd jobs, mending clothes, and fetching water for wealthier villagers. But it wasn't enough.

She needed a miracle.

And sometimes, miracles came in unexpected forms.

Later that evening, as Amara walked home from the marketplace, she overheard whispers of a wealthy merchant who had come to the village. A man who offered opportunities to those desperate enough to take them.

She found him near the town square - a man dressed in fine silks, his carriage gleaming in the fading sunlight. His eyes, sharp and assessing, landed on Amara as if he had been expecting her.

"You look like a girl with ambition," he said smoothly.

Amara hesitated. "I am just looking for work."

He smiled, but something in his expression sent a chill down her spine. "Work, I can offer. A chance to change your fate."

Amara's heart pounded. Could this be the answer she had been praying for?

She thought of her mother, of the promise she had made.

And she stepped forward.

Amara stood before the stranger, her fingers curling around the fabric of her worn shawl. The man's eyes gleamed with something unreadable, but desperation had already begun to drown out her caution.

"My name is Elias Varun," the merchant said smoothly. "And I am in need of a bright, hardworking young woman. The work is simple, and the pay is generous."

"What kind of work?" Amara asked, keeping her voice steady.

"You would serve in my household, assisting my wife. It is honest labor, and I will ensure your mother is provided for in your absence."

It sounded too good to be true. But Amara had no room left for doubt.

"I accept," she said.

Elias smiled. "Wise choice, my dear."

That evening, she told her mother about the opportunity. Leila hesitated, a flicker of worry in her tired eyes.

"I don't trust men who offer too much," she murmured.

"But, Mama, this could be our chance," Amara pleaded. "You need medicine. You need rest."

Leila cupped her daughter's face. "Just promise me you will be careful."

"I promise."

Amara left the next morning, unaware that she had just walked into a trap.

Elias' home was nothing like Amara had expected. It was grand, towering over the village with marble pillars and sprawling gardens. Yet, something about it felt hollow.

She was introduced to Lady Selene, Elias' wife, a woman with cold eyes and an even colder smile.

"You are to do as you are told," she instructed. "No questions. No hesitation."

At first, the work seemed simple - cleaning, assisting the kitchen staff, serving Lady Selene. But as days passed, Amara realized she was more prisoner than servant.

Elias watched her too closely. The promises he had made about sending money to her mother remained unfulfilled.

One evening, she confronted him.

"You said you would help my mother," she said.

Elias sighed. "You are naive, child."

Her stomach twisted. "You lied to me?"

He stepped closer, and the air in the room turned suffocating. "You belong to me now, Amara. And in time, you will understand what that means."

Panic surged in her veins. She had to escape.

But the walls were too high, and the doors were always locked.

Hope was fading.

Weeks passed. Amara grew weaker, her spirit dimming like a candle in the wind. She dreamed of her mother, of the life she had left behind.

Then, one night, she overheard something that shattered what little hope remained.

"The girl will not last much longer," Lady Selene murmured.

"She is stubborn," Elias replied. "But she will break soon enough."

A shiver ran down Amara's spine. She could not wait any longer.

That night, she made her escape. She ran through the halls, her heart pounding, until she reached the outer courtyard.

But just as her fingers touched the iron gate, strong hands seized her from behind.

"You should not have done that," Elias' voice hissed in her ear.

Then came the pain.

And then - darkness.

Amara awoke in a small, windowless room, her body aching.

"You have disappointed me," Elias said, standing over her.

She could not cry. She had no more tears left.

"I will never be yours," she whispered.

Elias chuckled. "You say that now."

Days turned into weeks. Amara stopped fighting. Stopped hoping.

Until she heard a voice.

"Amara?"

Her mother.

Somehow, Leila had found her.

The door burst open, and there stood her mother, frail but furious.

"You will not take her," Leila spat.

Elias smirked. "She is already mine."

But Leila was no longer weak. With trembling hands, she pulled a small dagger from her sleeve.

"You will let her go," she said.

Elias laughed - until the dagger plunged into his chest.

Amara and her mother ran. Through the halls, through the gardens, past the gates.

They did not stop until they reached the village.

But by then, it was too late.

Leila collapsed, coughing violently. Blood stained her lips.

"Mama, hold on," Amara pleaded.

Leila smiled weakly. "I told you? not to let the world steal your light."

Then, like a candle in the wind, she was gone.

Amara screamed.

The world had stolen everything.

The days after her mother's death passed in a blur.

Elias was dead. His household scattered.

But none of it mattered.

Amara stood before her mother's grave, the final ember of her spirit flickering.

She had survived.

But at what cost?

The wind whispered through the trees, carrying the echoes of a promise she had once made.

She would not let the world steal her light.

But some flames were never meant to burn forever.

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