I love the subtle shift to sensual yearning in the narrator's tone. She is so accustomed to the dreary routine of her marriage she is practically shocked by her sudden foray into fantasy. Well done! This story made me uncomfortably aware of how our circum

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A lovely poignant little vignette. I could taste the food and the frustration at her life.

Loved it. The end made me laugh out loud.

Enjoyed this. I could really picture the scene and the woman's frustration, her secret hopes and resignation. Well done.

I can almost feel myself there watching the couple, and I wonder what next for the wife. I hope she doesn't get sucked into free child minding for the grandchildren!

I love the build up of energy as she moves through memories and dissatisfaction and imagines escape, and the undercutting finale made me laugh out loud. It’s very clear, and funny, on the characters’ deficiencies but also very humane and avoids mockery. T