Jenny has finally found happiness, even though her abusive stepfather is still a part of her life. She has decided to venture out and put her trust in someone, but that seems to be destroying her happiness once and for all.
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Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)
It's good, I liked it but didn't love it. I wanted more detail, metaphors, analogy. It needs more subtle foreshadowing, and tighter dialogue, nothing that requires a major re-write of any section.
Thanks a lot, Ma'am :)
Thanks Neha :)
A little predictable somewhere in the middle, but well crafted.
Job well done Sonal. :)
Simple, short and sensible.
Shaayy, thank you soooo much.. You are the best :D :*
Perfect. I am so much Impressed Sonal Pandey.! Know what, i could really smell the "you" factor in it, i mean if it had no author name written anywhere, i could have easily guessed its you. Too good. Hats Off boss. The words used, the way narrated, totall
Thanks a lot for the appreciation :)
Great story, Loved it... :)
Thank you :)
Good Work.. Keep up the spirit.. :)
sayi sayi! :D
Great story, I loved the ending. Keep up the good work!
Thanks a lot everyone :)
awesome work sonal !!
Keep it up :)
Very nice nd interestng story sonal..:-)
aaaiiinnnn haaaiiiiinnnnn....nice story, ladki....hmmmmm...planning to win-win....again.. ;)
rockinggg. nice story
Thanks a lot Rashi :)
WOW is the word.....such an interesting kind of a story that i couldn't take my side off the screen...superb :)
nice story well job sonal