The Chronology of a Broken Trust

Fiction | Dec 14, 2011 | 14 min read
33 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Fiction

The Chronology of a Broken Trust

Jenny has finally found happiness, even though her abusive stepfather is still a part of her life. She has decided to venture out and put her trust in someone, but that seems to be destroying her happiness once and for all.

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Ruhani Mar 2, 2019

Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)

Titu Jan 13, 2017

Excellent!

illustrated18 Mar 27, 2012

It's good, I liked it but didn't love it. I wanted more detail, metaphors, analogy. It needs more subtle foreshadowing, and tighter dialogue, nothing that requires a major re-write of any section.

Dec 19, 2011

Thanks a lot, Ma'am :)

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