Nice story

Interesting but a little disjointed with some poor word choices. Could be a really good read with some work😄

Interesting story Sonal. it has been nicely penned down … really appreciate the way you have maintain its rhythm and its simplicity… keep it up…:)

Excellent!

It's good, I liked it but didn't love it. I wanted more detail, metaphors, analogy. It needs more subtle foreshadowing, and tighter dialogue, nothing that requires a major re-write of any section.

Thanks a lot, Ma'am :)

Thanks Neha :)

A little predictable somewhere in the middle, but well crafted. Job well done Sonal. :)

Thanks Abhineet

Simple, short and sensible.

Shaayy, thank you soooo much.. You are the best :D :*

Perfect. I am so much Impressed Sonal Pandey.! Know what, i could really smell the "you" factor in it, i mean if it had no author name written anywhere, i could have easily guessed its you. Too good. Hats Off boss. The words used, the way narrated, totall

Thanks a lot for the appreciation :)

Great story, Loved it... :)

Thank you :)

Good Work.. Keep up the spirit.. :)

sayi sayi! :D

Great story, I loved the ending. Keep up the good work!

Thanks a lot everyone :)

awesome work sonal !! Keep it up :)

Very nice nd interestng story sonal..:-)

aaaiiinnnn haaaiiiiinnnnn....nice story, ladki....hmmmmm...planning to win-win....again.. ;)

rockinggg. nice story

Thanks a lot Rashi :)

WOW is the word.....such an interesting kind of a story that i couldn't take my side off the screen...superb :)

nice story well job sonal