The Ashes Of GETORA

Mystery | 8th Dec 2011|4 min read

Divyansh

John and Sera were leading perfect lives until a mysterious package arrived at their doorstep one day.


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  • shakuntala

    15th Jan

    kkfkff

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  • 17th Dec

    wonderful story,,, makes a wonderful impact on the reader,, reading i just went with the flow everything was like, it's happening in front of me.... awesome work.. will recommend this for a good short film... it will be a great thing to happen...

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  • 15th Dec

    Hey, i really liked your story..its really amazing.. hope we get next story very soon..

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  • Divyansh

    14th Dec

    thanks everyone...... this is very inspiring !!

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  • 13th Dec

    Hey that's a nice story... Full of suspense, horror with Tragic ending, scared me... enjoyed reading it!!!!

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  • Ruhani

    13th Dec

    Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....

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  • 11th Dec

    It is interesting story like it. I really enjoy full read this story....

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  • 11th Dec

    Loved the story divyansh......short and paced script totally kept the story crisp and interesting in every plot.....awesome!!!!!!!loved it!!!

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  • 10th Dec

    breathtaking story, wonderful thought process executed very well. looking forward for more stuff from you.

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  • 9th Dec

    really nice story. i like it.

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  • 9th Dec

    Hi, Nice one. Looking forward for the next one. Thanks

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  • 9th Dec

    Couldnt agree more with Jyotsna. Creative...gave me the creeps which says alot. Would like to see more.

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  • 9th Dec

    hey, nice story. well written and pretty dark. thanks for sharing.

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  • Jaspreet

    9th Dec

    wow... nice story... Enjoyed reading it... :)

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