Excellent story Divyansh! Nice play on words. Kept my attention right till the end. Nice job!! Divyansh could you please read one of my stories and rate it and leave a comment. I am new to this. I would really like some input on my writing abilities. Tha

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wonderful story,,, makes a wonderful impact on the reader,, reading i just went with the flow everything was like, it's happening in front of me.... awesome work.. will recommend this for a good short film... it will be a great thing to happen...

Hey, i really liked your story..its really amazing.. hope we get next story very soon..

thanks everyone...... this is very inspiring !!

Hey that's a nice story... Full of suspense, horror with Tragic ending, scared me... enjoyed reading it!!!!

Reading ur story, i felt like i am watching some movie, could picturize the whole story, so natural and so simply written and elaborated... Perfect combination of short, simple and scary... Keep it up Divyansh... would love to read some more....

It is interesting story like it. I really enjoy full read this story....

Loved the story divyansh......short and paced script totally kept the story crisp and interesting in every plot.....awesome!!!!!!!loved it!!!

breathtaking story, wonderful thought process executed very well. looking forward for more stuff from you.

really nice story. i like it.

Hi, Nice one. Looking forward for the next one. Thanks

Couldnt agree more with Jyotsna. Creative...gave me the creeps which says alot. Would like to see more.

hey, nice story. well written and pretty dark. thanks for sharing.

wow... nice story... Enjoyed reading it... :)