Comedy

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Two prisoners talking during the times of distress. What will it lead to? Read further to reveal.

Jul 1, 2014 | 8 min read

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Steven A Nimocks

Sep 29, 2020

It was kind of hard to follow exactly what was happening. It sounded like the main character ended up in a surreal alternate universe, but I may be wrong.

Mar 27, 2017

Bob - how did this story at marked 'comedy?' Did I miss something? That aside, your visuals are good. I knew immediately where I was and could almost smell the place. Use conjunctions in dialog where appropriate you're instead of you are. Read you

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