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Comedy | 1st Jul 2014|8 min read

Bob


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  • 26th Mar

    Bob - how did this story at marked 'comedy?' Did I miss something? That aside, your visuals are good. I knew immediately where I was and could almost smell the place. Use conjunctions in dialog where appropriate you're instead of you are. Read you

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