Speech

Comedy | Jul 1, 2014 | 8 min read
1 Votes, average: 4 out of 5
Comedy

Speech

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Mar 26, 2017

Bob - how did this story at marked 'comedy?' Did I miss something? That aside, your visuals are good. I knew immediately where I was and could almost smell the place. Use conjunctions in dialog where appropriate you're instead of you are. Read you

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