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It was kind of hard to follow exactly what was happening. It sounded like the main character ended up in a surreal alternate universe, but I may be wrong.
Steven A Nimocks
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Bob, I stopped at the first paragraph when I realized you had not proofed your copy. The word 'to' was missing from in front of recognize. I would love to read more of your work but you have to do your share - proofing sucks but it has to be done. C
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Bob - how did this story at marked 'comedy?' Did I miss something? That aside, your visuals are good. I knew immediately where I was and could almost smell the place. Use conjunctions in dialog where appropriate you're instead of you are. Read you
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