My Brother By Candy Croc

Mystery

My Brother

The nightmares wouldn't stop until I received a visit from my brother.

Apr 19, 2019 | 4 min read

Candy Croc

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Mystery Mystery Paranormal Horror Ghosts Spirits Short Story Nightmares Brother Love Family Scared Death Drugs
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Apr 6, 2020

Interesting story. I believe you have the basis of a really good story but you might want to flush out more of the characters. For Example Megan. We only learn her name (the narrator) at the end. Nor do we find any details about the husband outside of sle

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Apr 19, 2019

Very well told slice of life story. This type of foreshadowing has a very personal element to it and I feel like it could be more powerful with more of a character build-up to really get to know the main character.

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Candy Croc

Apr 20, 2019

Thanks Chuck, I might do a longer story next time and then I can implement your advice ; )

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