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My Act.

A girl narrates a series of violent events where they are betrayed and attacked by someone they trusted. In self-defense, she fights back and ultimately ends up killing their assailant. The police arrive and arrest her, leading to her placement in a psychiatric hospital where she manipulates her way to early release. Upon release, she seeks revenge on those who wronged her, culminating in a spree of killings including the original assailant. The protagonist shows no remorse and revels in the chaos she creates, even setting a house on fire. She is eventually caught again and returned to the psychiatric hospital, where she feels her sanity slipping away and eventually commiting suicide by jumping out of a window. The story ends with the implication that the protagonist's evil nature may even frighten the devil. The narrative is filled with themes of revenge, manipulation, violence, and a descent into madness.

Feb 25, 2025  |   6 min read

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Kaylee Takacs
My Act.
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Never trust anybody

My "friends" slam the door behind them, leaving me alone in a room with an axe murderer. "Damn, that was messed up. You feel like getting revenge?" the murderer says offering you a hand. I look at him with a huge grin on my face as I take his hand. He helps me up and then stabs me in the stomach. It's not the first time I have been in a fight and have gotten stabbed, this time I was prepared. "Haven't your "friends" taught you anything about never trusting a stranger?" I laughed at his comment and I grabbed the pocket knife from my back pocket and in one quick second I sliced the blade across his stomach. I start laughing hard when I see the look of horror on his face. "Yeah that's what I thought, you're just like the rest of them." He steps back and asks "What do you mean the rest of them?" " I'm saying that they always think it's fun and games until the victim fights back" He drops his axe and strikes fast. He grabs me in by the waist and spins me around, covering my mouth. I drop my knife and start kicking. He drags me deeper into the room. He throws me on the ground, heading back to grab his axe. Out of breath I look around and find that we're in the gym. I grab a baseball bat and hit him in the side of his head. He hits the floor following with a loud THUMP. I smile at my work, seeing that I hit him hard enough that his skull is bashed inwards. I check to see if he is still breathing and when I see that he is I grab his axe and Lift it above my head getting ready to strike again. I drop the axe when I hear the doors open. About 5 police officers come in and grab me by the shoulders and pull me back. I told them what happened and my "Friends" Lied and said it was me that was trying to kill them and was chasing them with the axe. Obviously they took their word against mine because it was 1 against 3. I look in the corner of my eye and find the actual murderer is alive and is getting up, he acts like he is innocent and I flash him a smile. I start yelling and then eventually get dragged into the back of a police car. I start laughing at the last words I said before getting in here. "I will fucking kill you all."

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Kaylee Takacs

Feb 26, 2025

Hope you enjoy! This is my first book! Sorry if you don't like it.

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