Wonderfully done

***superduperlike***

Good read. Keep writing, you have a gift for it!

Eddywalker has given a very good feedback to your story... It's a very interesting read.. Keep writing

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awesome story dear. i really enjoy this. well done, gud job. :)

wonderfully written. emotions expressed very nicely. characters were very real as well. the most important part of any tragedy is the little bits of happiness here and there that later make the pain real and those little bits were very nicely written like