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Eternal love

Part 1

Feb 21, 2024  |   4 min read

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Nandhini D
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The sky was very dark and thundering, it was very beautiful rainy day. A girl named lisa with sparking eyes and brown hair was just enjoying the weather. Suddenly she fainted. She was hospitalized. Her parents was very worried about her. 

Doctor : We are very sorry this is 4th stage of colorectal cancer. We could not save her.

Even though she was treated she couldn't be saved. After she died she entered the heavenly garden. She had never seen a garden like this. It is the large lovely garden filled with green grass which tickled her feet. The wind blow and kissed her face. Birds began to fly away with the wind and the garden in covered with lovey flowers like stars. She saw spectacular waterfall, the water was like smooth paper being shred on the rock. The pillow clouds started to cover over the mountains.

           She was mesmerized. There begins the line to heavenly garden. One by one started to enter into the gate. She was totally confused and curious about the place. She entered the palace.

God : Are you ready to enter into the new world?

  [ It's the place where death people's soul enter into new world to begin their new life. ] 

God : To start your new life you should not have any unfulfilled desires in your past life. 

 Lisa was happy to enter into new world but in other hand she has unfulfilled desires in her past life.

                         (Before 2 years)

       

Lisa was born in Hawaii. Like everyone else she lived a very happy life. One day when she was waiting for the bus.Chals hot, handsome and sexy as well as rich where he run's his own business in Hawaii. He saw lisa for the first time. At the first sight he got impressed by her. He was mesmerized. 

The bus arrived she got on the bus and left. Chals tried to follow her but he missed her. He was very tensed and worried about how to find her. He went to his office. He can't focus on his work. He's thinking about how to find her. James arrived. James is his business partner as well as his best friend.

            [ Chals share each and every think to his friend james. In his childhood chals lost his parents like james. Since childhood They have grown up together and they started their own business]

James : Chals what are you thinking too deeply.

Chals   : when I was on my way I saw a girl. I really like her James and I don't know how to find her.

James : Oh finally you fall in love right.

Chals.  : I don't james but I really like her.

       

 Lisa went home. Recently her family was suffering financially. She attended several interviews, but she got rejected by all. She was worried about how to take care of her family. 

                          (After 1week)

 She went to a company to attend an interview. She was anxious to get this job to support her family financially. She entered the room and gave her resume to her interviewer. Chals got exited and he is very happy to see the girl again. He got lost in her eyes. His mind lost its ability to focus. He feels like he is dreaming, but he is not.

                       [To be continued]

     

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