Do you love me?

Romance | 22nd Feb 2012|2 min read

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  • 11th Apr

    How is it the boy has a condition were he cannot speak but yet is capable of calling her the phone?????

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  • 27th Feb

    Very well done... :)

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  • duskbrood

    25th Feb

    Ok, this is a good start. A short little thing like this is how all good stories get going. That said, the reader needs a lot more if they're going to feel invested in this couple. Just a few suggestions: - Expound a lot more on their relationship before

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  • 24th Feb

    Hey that's a good one story; i think u ended it up very quickly, could have elaborated it little more, would have been a much better story line, also what i couldn't get as why u categorized it an inspirational one. please give me a reason, may be i am n

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  • 23rd Feb

    very heart touching story.

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