The Den
This is an archive of stories straight from the halls between my soul and heart.



The Den
This is an archive of stories straight from the halls between my soul and heart.
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A Good Day
Very well written
Aastha


A Good Day
Thank you and I’ll make sure to go over and give it a read
Donta Mackey


A Good Day
This is a very intense piece. As someone who has struggled with mental illness, this hits the nail on the head.On a technical note, this is solid writing. There are some run-on sentences, which work in the deep parts but less so outside them. Also, watch out for passive tense. A piece this solid needs active tense every bit of the way.It wasn't always a fun read, but it was gripping and felt very real.
DavidCreighton


A Good Day
"I did not know," I whispered, reflecting on my Marine brother's silent struggles. His hidden battles echoed my own doubts. Faith has been my refuge, teaching me that seeking help is a courageous act.No one should face these challenges alone. Professional guidance can help silence our inner demons. I urge fellow veterans and all people to reach out; our invisible scars deserve attention. Together, we can support one another—camaraderie is our greatest strength.
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