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CHASING LIFE
The respected teacher was not saved from illness by either his neighbors or his students. Meanwhile, the protagonist, who spent his life chasing life itself, ultimately turned the fruits of that pursuit into something that benefited others. To me, that leaves a big question: which of them was truly right?
Viacheslav Sannikov
CHASING LIFE
Protagonist Agency: The protagonist’s internal struggle is relatable, but early on, they act primarily as a passive observer. To heighten engagement, ensure their active choices—even flawed ones—drive the narrative forward rather than events simply happening to them. Dialogue & Subtext: Dialogue is sharp and natural overall. Watch for moments of "exposition dumping," where characters speak aloud details they both already know purely for the reader's benefit. Replacing exposition with subtle bod
Hassaan