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The Tapestry of Fate: Kai's Rise Against Azaroth
Hold up there, weary traveler! Be thou sure to lay thine eyes upon these majestic words as scribed here by Weaver of the Light, Charles van Veen.Sir Charles, I salute you! I not only related with the characters, yet also envisioned my own animated version of them. Truly well done, I actually learnt from you here, and will apply those newly-acquired skills to my next story.P.S. I gasped when Kai met up with Elana, yet knew deep down that the hope was false.
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The Tapestry of Fate: Kai's Rise Against Azaroth
As a new reader to short stories, I find this short story very descriptive and inspiring. This description here is used perfectly, I love it e.g "A scrawny boy with eyes like molten amber."
Andrew Duffy
The Tapestry of Fate: Kai's Rise Against Azaroth
This reads like the outline for a longer novel. I wound up skimming it instead of actually reading the plot. Start again with chapter one and act it out with dialogue and fuller action description and the readers will be engaged.
Stephen Greencliff