It was a nice read. Short and simple. Felt like a breath of fresh air.

It’s lovely I enjoyed it thanks

could do with a litle trimming "none can surely tell" sounds like a Quaker sermon "a sound of a few honks" is that geese? "she forwarded her hand to him" by post? Just a few trims and a good flash fiction story emerges!

Neat story, but a few observations. Perhaps a few clumsy expressions? "None can surely tell" Quaker talk? "a sound of a few honks" Cars? Trim this up and a good flash fiction can emerge ! "She forwarded her hand to him." by post?