Romance

Under The Mahogany Tree

Aug 22, 2012 | 20 min read

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Dandreb James
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Aug 29, 2012

Awesome story.. Thanks for sharing this..

C H

Charles Harvey

Aug 23, 2012

Nice story. It held my attention. It had the right amount of tension. There was a problem with the POV in which the story was told. It happened in the past, but when you say something will happen, it's like the action is going to happen in the future.

Aug 23, 2012

Story is perfect in every way. Good effort. I like it

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