In the heart of the Appalachian Mountains lies an old house, abandoned and on the verge of falling to pieces, but still somehow standing tall and proud. Blackthorn Manor is over a hundred years old, and has several rumors circulating within its walls. The local people, many of whom love a good conspiracy, speak of windows which flickered, and of shadows which were devoid of people in them. Some even went as far as to claim that the house had the ability to speak, and insisted that they heard whispers emanating from Blackthorn Manor, on more than one occasion.
For as much as they loved a good gossip, the townspeople were ironically all bark and no bite. The rumors were more than enough to convince the locals to stay clear of this house, no matter how much of their curiousity was piqued. As such, the manor remained standing on the peak of the mountain - grand and looked upon with awe, but greatly feared and generally steered clear of (not very unlike the dignified headmaster of a school).
Or at least that was the case, until a woman named Mara. Mara was an urban explorer - bold, undeterred and adventrous, and her objective was to find the truth behind the old house and its mysterious going-ons. Hence, on the evening of a December, armed with nothing but a camera and her trusty flashlight, she arrived at the house, precisely when the sun began to set. The sight that greeted her was exactly what she expected of a house forgotten by time - the wood was splintered, the windows were broken, and from her position in front of it, the humongous manor seemed to loom over her.
The first thing that welcomed Mara was a cold breeze that had the faint smell of rot embedded in it. To her surprise, the interior of the house was far worse - there were dripping echoes of water, the furniture was coated with a thick layer of dust, the walls were scarred with cobwebs, and there seemed to be an entire community of mice and cockroaches residing within its walls. But the most disturbing part of the entire ordeal was the whispers, which sounded human, yet were impossible to pin point the location of.
Mara moved cautiously, the beam of her flashlight being the only source of guidance and illumination in this eerie darkness. Her camera clicked intermittently, capturing the eerie beauty of the decayed mansion. But as she ascended the grand staircase, she felt it—eyes watching her. Turning sharply, she found nothing but shadows.
In one of the upstairs rooms, she discovered a peculiar sight: a child’s room, perfectly preserved. A rocking horse stood in the corner, its paint faded but intact. On the bed lay a porcelain doll, its painted smile cracked and unnerving. As she stepped closer, her flashlight flickered and went out, plunging her into pitch-black darkness. When it turned back on, the doll was gone.
Mara abruptly turned towards the doorway, shock and fear making her movements erratic. The rocking horse was swaying gently, as though someone had just left it, and the previous whispers grew louder now, clearer—soft voices calling her name. She fled the room, her footsteps echoing down the hall, but no matter how fast she ran, the whispers followed, their tone growing more insistent.
Mara stumbled into a large room at the end of the hall—a parlor with a grand fireplace and a mirror tarnished by time. As she caught her reflection, her blood ran cold. Behind her, a shadowy figure loomed—a tall man with hollow eyes and an impossibly wide grin. Spinning around, she found nothing there. But the air was heavy, suffocating, as though the house itself was alive and angry. The whispers turned to screams, filling her ears with deafening cries of anguish. She bolted for the stairs, her flashlight casting wild shadows as she stumbled downward.
When she reached the front door, it slammed shut. She pulled desperately and furiously on the handle, screaming for help, but the house refused to let her go. A voice, clear and chilling, whispered in her ear, “You’re ours now.”
The next morning, Blackthorn Manor stood as it always had—silent, foreboding, and empty. Mara’s car was found parked nearby, her camera resting on the passenger seat. But she was never seen again. A week later, a group of curious teens dared to explore the manor. In one of the upstairs rooms, they found a peculiar sight: a porcelain doll sitting on the bed, its painted smile cracked and hauntingly familiar.


