Maya had walked past the old house a hundred times, but it was never just a house to her.

It stood at the end of Temple Road, behind a rusted iron gate that leaned slightly to one side, as if it had grown tired of standing guard. The walls were cracked, the windows broken, and vines had claimed nearly every inch of it. To most people, it was just another abandoned place—something to ignore.

But not to Maya.

From the time she was a child, she had felt something unusual about it. A quiet pull. A whisper without words.

“Don’t look at it too long,” her grandmother, Amma, would say whenever they passed by. “That place has its own mind.”

Maya used to laugh at that. A house with a mind? It sounded like a story meant to scare children.

But as she grew older, her curiosity didn’t fade—it deepened.

One evening, just as the sun was setting, Maya noticed something that made her stop in her tracks.

A faint golden glow flickered behind the broken windows.

She blinked.

It disappeared.

“Maya!” her best friend Nethmi called from across the road. “What are you staring at?”

“Did you see that?” Maya asked.

“See what?”

“The light… inside the house.”

Nethmi frowned. “There’s no electricity there. It’s been empty for years.”

“I know what I saw.”

Nethmi crossed her arms. “You’ve been reading too many mystery books.”

But Maya didn’t reply. Her eyes were still fixed on the house.

That night, she couldn’t sleep.

The image of the glow replayed in her mind again and again.

The next day, she went to see Uncle Sunil, the old gardener who worked near the temple.

“Uncle,” she began, “do you know anything about the house at the end of the road?”

Uncle Sunil paused, his expression shifting slightly.

“Why are you asking, duwa?”

“I saw a light there yesterday.”

He looked at her carefully. “Did you go inside?”

“No.”

“Good,” he said firmly. “And don’t.”

“Why?”

He sighed and leaned on his shovel. “Long ago, that place belonged to a family. They loved their garden more than anything. Rare plants, strange flowers… things you wouldn’t see anywhere else.”

“What happened to them?”

“No one knows for sure,” he replied. “One day, they were just… gone.”

Maya felt a chill. “Gone?”

“Some say they left. Others say the garden took them.”

Maya laughed nervously. “That’s not possible.”

Uncle Sunil’s eyes met hers. “Some places are not meant to be understood.”

But Maya couldn’t let it go.

That evening, just before sunset, she made a decision.

She was going in.

“Maya, don’t be stupid,” Nethmi said when she heard the plan. “This isn’t a movie.”

“I just want to see it once,” Maya insisted.

“I’m coming with you then.”

“No,” Maya said quickly. “If something happens—”

“Exactly. That’s why you shouldn’t go alone.”

After a moment, Maya nodded. “Okay. Together.”

They stood in front of the gate as the sky turned orange.

“This is your last chance to turn back,” Nethmi muttered.

Maya pushed the gate open.

It creaked loudly, echoing through the silence.

Inside, the garden was wild and overgrown. Thick vines twisted around broken statues. The air felt heavier, cooler.

“Why does it feel like… someone’s watching us?” Nethmi whispered.

Maya didn’t answer.

She felt it too.

They walked deeper.

The flowers were unlike anything they had ever seen—glowing faintly, shifting colors, almost as if they were alive.

“Okay, this is weird,” Nethmi said.

Then they saw it.

In the center of the garden stood a single wooden door.

No walls. No frame. Just a door.

Nethmi grabbed Maya’s arm. “We’re leaving.”

“Wait,” Maya said softly.

“WAIT? Maya, that door is standing in the middle of nowhere!”

Maya stepped closer.

The air around the door shimmered.

“I think… it’s meant to be opened.”

“Of course you think that!” Nethmi snapped.

Maya reached out.

“Don’t!” Nethmi shouted.

But it was too late.

The door opened.

A soft light spilled out.

Inside… was another garden.

Perfect. Beautiful. Alive.

Maya stepped forward.

“Maya, don’t go in!” Nethmi cried.

Maya hesitated only for a second.

Then she stepped through.

The moment she did, the door slammed shut.

“MAYA!”

Silence.

Maya turned around.

The door was gone.

“Nethmi?” she called.

No answer.

She was alone.

The garden around her was breathtaking—flowers glowing softly, leaves whispering in the wind, the air filled with a strange energy.

But something felt… wrong.

The flowers began to turn.

Toward her.

A voice echoed, gentle yet powerful.

“Why have you come?”

Maya’s heart pounded. “I… I was curious.”

“Curiosity is the key,” the voice said. “It opens what is hidden.”

“Where am I?” she asked.

“This is the heart of the garden.”

Maya looked around. “Where is my friend?”

“She did not enter. Only you chose to cross.”

Maya swallowed. “I want to go back.”

“Not all who enter can leave.”

Fear gripped her.

“What do you mean?”

The ground shimmered beneath her feet.

“This garden was once cared for with love,” the voice continued. “But love turned into control. The family wished to keep its beauty forever… and so, the garden became something more.”

Maya’s mind raced. “What happened to them?”

“They became part of it.”

The flowers glowed brighter.

Maya stepped back.

“You must choose,” the voice said.

“Choose what?”

“To stay… and become part of this eternal beauty… or to leave, if your heart is free of greed.”

Maya thought of everything she had seen—the beauty, the mystery.

For a moment, she was tempted.

To stay in a place so perfect.

But then she thought of Nethmi. Of Amma.

Of home.

“I don’t belong here,” she said firmly.

Silence.

The garden seemed to hold its breath.

“I didn’t come to take anything,” Maya continued. “I just wanted to understand. But now I see… some things are not meant to be kept.”

The light softened.

The flowers slowly turned away.

A path appeared.

At the end of it stood the wooden door.

“Go,” the voice whispered.

Maya ran.

She reached the door and pushed it open.

Light flashed.

She stumbled forward—

—and fell onto the dry ground of the abandoned garden.

“MAYA!”

Nethmi rushed to her side.

“You disappeared! I thought—”

“I’m okay,” Maya said, breathless.

They both turned.

The wooden door was gone.

The garden looked… normal.

Dead. Silent.

As if nothing had ever happened.

“Let’s go,” Maya said.

They ran out, not looking back.

Days passed.

Weeks.

The house remained quiet.

No glow. No strange flowers.

Nothing.

One evening, Maya stood by the gate again.

Nethmi joined her. “You’re not thinking of going back, right?”

Maya smiled.

“No.”

“Good.”

Maya looked at the house one last time.

“I think… it’s finally at peace.”

As they turned to leave, a soft breeze passed through the garden.

For a brief moment, Maya thought she heard a whisper—

“Thank you.”

She stopped.

“What?” Nethmi asked.

Maya shook her head.

“Nothing.”

But deep inside, she knew.

The garden had not been waiting for someone to trap.

It had been waiting for someone to understand.

And finally…

someone had set it free.

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