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**The Last Wave**

A daughter's seaside dream, a mother's selfless love, a joyously fulfilled wish turned devastatingly tragic. Experience the breathtaking beauty and sudden cruelty of the ocean in this heart-wrenching story of love and loss that will stay with you.

May 9, 2025  |   4 min read
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**The Last Wave**
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The sun hung low in the sky, casting a golden hue over the small town of Almas. Liliya, a spirited girl of twelve, often found herself lost in daydreams, her heart yearning for the vastness of the sea. She would sit by her window, gazing at the horizon, imagining the waves crashing against the shore, the salty breeze dancing through her hair. But dreams, she knew, often remained just that - dreams.

"Liliya, are you daydreaming again?" her mother, Fatima, called from the kitchen, her voice laced with warmth.

"Just thinking about the sea, Mama," Liliya replied, her voice tinged with longing.

Fatima sighed, her heart heavy with the weight of their modest life. "One day, my love. One day, we will see it together."

But as the days turned into months, Liliya's dream felt more distant than ever. Their family struggled to make ends meet, and the thought of a trip to the sea seemed impossible. Yet, Liliya remained grateful, often reminding herself of those who had it worse.

Then, one fateful day, the school announced a picnic to the sea. Excitement buzzed through the air, but Liliya's heart sank. She knew her family couldn't afford the trip.

"Why do they have to go to the sea?" she whispered to herself, trying to suppress the sadness that threatened to overwhelm her.

The next day, as her classmates chattered about their plans, Liliya sat quietly, a bittersweet smile on her face. Suddenly, she spotted her mother, Fatima, walking towards the school, her expression determined.

"Mama!" Liliya exclaimed, rushing to her. Fatima enveloped her in a warm embrace, planting a gentle kiss on her forehead.

"Liliya, my dear," Fatima said, her eyes sparkling with hope. "You are going on the picnic. You will see the sea!"

Liliya's heart raced. "But how, Mama? We can't afford it!"

Fatima smiled softly, "I saved up. I cut back on our groceries and other expenses. You deserve this, my love."

Tears of joy filled Liliya's eyes. "Thank you, Mama! I can't believe it!"

The day of the picnic arrived, and Liliya could hardly contain her excitement. As the bus rolled closer to the coast, her heart raced with anticipation. When they finally arrived, the sight of the endless blue stretched before her, shimmering under the sun.

"Look at it, Liliya!" her friend, Amina, shouted, pointing towards the waves. "Isn't it beautiful?"

Liliya stood in awe, her breath taken away by the vastness of the sea. She ran towards the water, feeling the cool waves lap at her feet. "It's more beautiful than I ever imagined!" she cried, laughter bubbling from her lips.

As the day wore on, Liliya splashed in the water, collecting seashells and building sandcastles. She felt alive, her heart full of gratitude. "Thank you, Creator, for this moment," she whispered, her eyes glistening with tears of joy.

But as the sun began to set, casting a warm glow over the horizon, tragedy struck. Liliya, in her excitement, ventured too far into the waves. A sudden undertow pulled her under, and despite the frantic cries of her friends, she disappeared beneath the surface.

Fatima, who had been watching from the shore, felt her heart shatter as she realized her daughter was gone. The joyous day turned into a nightmare, and the sea that had once been a dream became a haunting memory.

Days turned into weeks, and Fatima found herself lost in a fog of grief. She would sit by the shore, staring blankly at the waves, waiting for Liliya to return. Friends and family tried to comfort her, but nothing could fill the void left by her daughter.

"Why did you take her?" Fatima would cry to the sea, her voice breaking. "She only wanted to see you."

As the tides ebbed and flowed, Fatima remained a shell of her former self, forever bound to the sea that had taken her child. She would sit for hours, whispering Liliya's name into the wind, hoping that somehow, her daughter could hear her.

And so, the sea became a bittersweet reminder of dreams fulfilled and lives lost, a place where a mother mourned her daughter, forever searching for the laughter that once danced upon the waves.

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Shihab Tahmid

May 10, 2025

"Such a beautifully emotional story! You captured a mother’s love and a child’s dream so powerfully. Truly touched my heart."

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Sraboni.c

May 11, 2025

Thank you so much!  I hope to share more heartfelt stories in the future."

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Tahmina sultana

May 9, 2025

Awesome story..🥰💖

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Sraboni.c

May 9, 2025

Thanks a lot,,I'm glad that you liked 🖤

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