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The last train home

In "The Last Train Home," I find myself racing against time as the clock ticks down to the final train departure. The bustling station is filled with hurried travelers, each lost in their own world. As I navigate through the crowd, memories of my childhood flood back, reminding me of the warmth of home and the people I’ve left behind.

Jun 4, 2025  |   6 min read

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Gaone Makwati
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The sun dipped below the horizon, casting a warm golden hue over the small town of Eldridge. I stood on the platform of the old train station, the familiar scent of iron and coal wafting through the air, mingling with the faint aroma of the nearby bakery. It was a place I had known all my life, yet today felt different. Today was the day I would leave for good.

The last train home was scheduled to arrive at 7:45 PM, and I had just enough time to gather my thoughts. I had spent the last few weeks packing up my childhood, sorting through memories that had accumulated like dust in the corners of my mind. Each box I filled was a bittersweet reminder of the life I was leaving behind. My parents had moved to the city years ago, and I had stayed behind to finish school, but now it was time to join them. I was excited about the new opportunities that awaited me, but a part of me felt tethered to this place, to the memories that lingered like shadows.

As I waited, I watched the townsfolk bustle about, their lives continuing in a rhythm I had grown accustomed to. Mrs. Thompson, the elderly woman who ran the bakery, waved at me from her shop window, her flour-dusted hands raised in a friendly gesture. I smiled back, feeling a pang of nostalgia. I had spent countless afternoons there, savoring her famous blueberry muffins and listening to her stories about the town's history.

The station was quiet, save for the distant sound of a train whistle echoing through the valley. I glanced at my watch; it was almost time. I could hear the faint rumble of the train approaching, a sound that had always filled me with excitement as a child. But today, it felt more like a farewell.

As the train pulled into the station, its headlights cutting through the dusk, I felt a rush of emotions. The engine hissed and groaned, and the doors slid open with a mechanical sigh. I stepped forward, my heart racing. This was it. I took a deep breath, trying to steady myself, but the weight of my decision pressed heavily on my chest.

I boarded the train, finding a window seat where I could watch the world slip away. The interior was familiar, with worn seats and the faint smell of old upholstery. I settled in, clutching my backpack tightly, as if it were a lifeline. The train conductor made his rounds, checking tickets and offering a nod of acknowledgment. I could see the other passengers, each lost in their own thoughts, some chatting quietly, others staring blankly ahead.

As the train lurched forward, I felt a jolt of adrenaline. The landscape outside began to blur, the familiar sights of Eldridge fading into the distance. I watched as the fields transformed into patches of darkness, the last remnants of sunlight disappearing behind the hills. I was leaving behind the place that had shaped me, the town where I had learned to ride a bike, where I had fallen in love for the first time, and where I had said goodbye to my childhood.

The rhythmic clatter of the train wheels against the tracks was soothing, and I closed my eyes for a moment, allowing the memories to wash over me. I thought of my friends, the laughter we shared, the secrets we whispered under the stars. I thought of the summer nights spent at the lake, the way the water sparkled under the moonlight, and the feeling of freedom that came with being young and carefree.

But as the train continued its journey, I couldn't shake the feeling of loss. I had always dreamed of leaving Eldridge, of exploring the world beyond its borders, but now that I was actually doing it, I felt a sense of dread creeping in. What if I didn't belong in the city? What if I couldn't find my place among the bustling crowds and towering buildings? The thought gnawed at me, and I opened my eyes, staring out at the darkening landscape.

The train made a few stops along the way, picking up more passengers and letting others off. Each time the doors opened, I caught glimpses of lives that were so different from mine. A young couple boarded, laughing and holding hands, their excitement palpable. An elderly man sat across from me, his eyes twinkling with stories untold. I wondered about their journeys, where they were headed, and what they were leaving behind.

As the night deepened, the train's interior grew dim, illuminated only by the soft glow of overhead lights. I pulled out my phone, scrolling through messages from my parents. They were eager to welcome me to the city, to show me around and help me settle in. I felt a flicker of excitement at the thought of being with them again, but it was quickly overshadowed by the weight of uncertainty.

I glanced at the elderly man across from me, who was now staring out the window, lost in thought. There was something comforting about his presence, a reminder that I wasn't alone in this journey. I decided to strike up a conversation.

"Where are you headed?" I asked, my voice barely above a whisper.

He turned to me, his eyes crinkling into a smile. "Ah, just visiting my daughter in the city. She's been after me to come see her for ages. I finally decided it was time."

"Sounds nice," I replied, feeling a sense of camaraderie with this stranger.

"It is," he said, his voice warm. "But I've lived in this small town for so long. It's hard to leave it behind, you know?"

I nodded, understanding all too well. "I'm leaving my hometown too. It's a big change."

He studied me for a moment, his gaze thoughtful. "Change can be daunting, but it can also be a wonderful adventure. You never know what awaits you on the other side."

His words resonated with me, and I felt a flicker of hope. Perhaps this journey was not just about leaving, but about discovering who I was meant to be. I shared my fears with him, the uncertainty of moving to the city, and he listened intently, offering encouragement and wisdom from his own experiences.

As we talked, the train continued to glide through the night, the rhythmic sound of the wheels a comforting backdrop to our conversation. I learned about his daughter, her dreams, and the life she had built in the city. He spoke of the joys of family and the importance of staying connected, no matter the distance.

Before I knew it, the train began to slow, the lights of the city twinkling in the distance. My heart raced with a mix of excitement and anxiety. The elderly man smiled at me, his eyes twinkling. "Remember, every ending is just a new beginning. Embrace it."

As the train came to a stop, I gathered my things, feeling a sense of gratitude for the unexpected connection I had made. I stepped off the train, the cool night air hitting me like a wave. The city loomed before me, a sprawling metropolis filled with possibilities and challenges.

I took a deep breath, letting the energy of the city wash over me. The sounds of honking cars, distant laughter, and the hum of life filled the air. I felt a rush of adrenaline, a sense of adventure coursing through my veins. This was it - the beginning of a new chapter.

I pulled out my phone, checking for messages from my parents. They were waiting for me just outside the station, eager to welcome me to my new life. I stepped into the bustling crowd, my heart pounding with anticipation. I was ready to embrace the unknown, to carve out my own path in this vibrant city.

As I made my way through the throngs of people, I couldn't help but glance back at the train, now a distant silhouette against the night sky. It had carried me away from my past, but it had also brought me to this moment - a moment filled with hope, possibility, and the promise of new beginnings.

I spotted my parents near the entrance, their faces lighting up as they saw me. I rushed toward them, feeling a wave of warmth and love envelop me. They embraced me tightly, and in that moment, I knew that no matter where life took me, I would always carry a piece of Eldridge in my heart.

The last train home had taken me away, but it had also brought me to where I was meant to be. And as I stepped into the city, I felt ready to embrace whatever lay ahead, knowing that every journey begins with a single step.

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