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The Garden of Lost Souls

A girl named Elara needs to find her way through "The Garden of Lost Souls".

May 2, 2025  |   16 min read

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The Garden of Lost Souls
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Chapter Six

Elara's heart pounded in her chest, the weight of the decision pressing on her like a physical force. Cassian stood before her, his eyes pleading, full of hope - but beneath that hope, there was an edge of fear. He had lived in this place for so long, disconnected from everything they had once known. How much of him remained? How much of her would she lose in order to bring him back?

The shadowed figure beside him - its form like dark smoke, fluid and shifting - watched her with an inscrutable presence. Every word it spoke seemed to reverberate in her very bones.

"You must choose," it said again. "A life. A truth. A memory. The price is steep. Do you understand?"

Elara swallowed, her throat dry. She glanced at Cassian, then back at the figure. A life. The very thought of sacrificing anyone - even herself - felt like a betrayal. A truth. She had worked so long to uncover the secrets of the world, to uncover nature's deepest mysteries. To lose one of those truths, one of those pillars of understanding, was unthinkable. A memory. Her mind turned over the precious moments she shared with Cassian, moments that defined who they were, what they had been to each other. Could she afford to lose a piece of that?

But as the moments stretched on, she realized there was one truth more important than the others.

"I choose?" Her voice cracked as she finally spoke. "I choose a memory."

Cassian's eyes widened. "Elara, no - "

But it was already done.

The garden shifted, the light dimming as the air became thick with a strange pressure. The ground beneath Elara's feet pulsed, as though it were alive, its tendrils reaching up around her. She felt something tear inside her - something both painful and hollow - as though a part of her soul had been pulled away. She gasped, staggering back.

"No!" she cried, reaching for the fading shadow of a memory. "I? I need it! I need to remember? us!"

But the memory was gone, slipping through her fingers like smoke.

For a moment, everything was still, silent. Then, the figure beside Cassian moved. The robed entity stepped forward, extending a hand toward her, the air around it rippling like heat.

"Your brother is free," it said, voice low and reverberating. "But your loss is now written. Do not seek to recover what you have left behind."

Cassian stepped forward, his gaze now full of something else - remorse, confusion, and a deep, unsettling recognition. "Elara, what have you done?"

He reached for her hand, but when their fingers touched, it felt wrong. The bond they shared was there, but there was a gap, a missing piece. His expression twisted in pain. He knew - just as she did - that something vital had been taken. Something irreplaceable.

Cassian opened his mouth to speak, but no words came out.

Elara stood there, staring at the space where the memory should have been - her brother's laughter, their shared childhood, the comfort of their family. It was all gone. A hole where their past had once been.

The garden trembled.

"You are no longer of the world you knew," the figure intoned. "The gate is closed. The price is paid."

The arch behind them faded into shadow, dissolving into the very air.

The garden, the entity, and the world beyond it all began to retreat. Cassian turned away, as though drawn toward something just beyond the edges of the garden, and Elara followed. They were free - but free from what, exactly?

As the mist around them thickened, Elara realized with a sinking heart that the world she had stepped into was not the one she had left. She had saved her brother, but at the cost of everything they had shared. And now, she had to live in the silence of that absence, forever bound to a garden that had taken far more than it had given.

Together, they moved forward - but neither of them spoke, for neither truly knew who they had become.

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