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the clockmaker paradox

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May 31, 2025  |   2 min read

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Sure! Here's an original short story with a mysterious and thought-provoking twist:

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### **"The Clockmaker's Paradox"**

In a forgotten alley of an ancient European city stood a tiny clock shop, run by a man named Eliot Virell. He was a quiet man with silver hair, thick spectacles, and fingers permanently stained with brass and oil. His clocks were unlike any other - intricate, elegant, and always precisely on time. Some whispered they were too perfect.

One rainy evening, a woman in a red coat entered the shop. She looked soaked, flustered, and out of breath.

"I need a clock," she said. "One that can go backward."

Eliot raised an eyebrow. "I don't sell novelties," he said.

"This isn't a joke," she replied, placing a thick envelope of cash on the counter.

Without a word, Eliot turned and disappeared behind a velvet curtain. The woman waited. Rain tapped against the windows like a ticking metronome.

Fifteen minutes later, Eliot returned, holding a small pocket watch made of blackened silver. Instead of numbers, the face had unfamiliar symbols, and its hands moved in reverse.

"Be warned," he said. "Time doesn't like to be rewritten. It always... compensates."

She took the watch, her fingers trembling, and left without another word.

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Years passed. Eliot kept making clocks, but he never forgot the woman. One day, a young man entered the shop, holding the same strange watch.

"My mother gave me this before she died," he said. "Told me to return it to you."

Eliot turned pale. "Did she ever use it?"

The man nodded. "To save my sister. She died in an accident, and... my mother changed it. Brought her back."

"And what happened next?"

The man looked confused. "My mother died shortly after. Same accident, different victim."

Eliot sighed. "Time doesn't like debts left unpaid."

The young man looked at the watch again. "Can it still be used?"

"Yes," Eliot said slowly. "But every use comes with a trade."

The man thought for a moment, then turned and left - leaving the ticking relic on the counter.

Eliot picked it up and whispered, "Eventually, time will come for me too."

And at that moment, all the clocks in the shop stopped.

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