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The Cave

this is my very first paranormal hunt

Feb 21, 2024  |   4 min read

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Dylan Walker
The Cave
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Growing up I always was a loser, a nobody, I was mocked for having aspergers syndrome and being in special ed classes, all i ever wanted was to be like my idols and hunt the paranormal and there were many places in town that were haunted but I was always told "who would believe you all you have is a personal journal"...and then one day I came accross this website and I knew i can make my dream work. So I went to my older brother brandon who was hangingout with his son Graysen (as it was hit weekend to have him) and asked I him if he would want to come along with me to the the famed Cave. Brandon looked at me his eyes filled with fright due to the legend of it but ever the man to hide his fear he agreed pulling his phone from his pocket and calling his wife.

Now once we got there we both stood in awe at the 40ft cliff we had to climb "uhh maybe we should have brought some gear" he said to me "oh come on don't be a wussy" i remarked as we began our hike up the clif. As we climbed the cliff halfway up my shoes were not exactly the best for climbing and i slipped almost falling down the 20ft drop to the dried up river below to my most certain death but at the very last moment my brother grabbed my hand "pull me up, please" i said to him as I looked down at the far drop below me "pull me up NOW!!" i said as he ruffled all his strengh and with a heave he got me back onto the ledge of the cliff "i'm not loosing you yet little brother" he remarks to me. So we kept on with our hike upto the Cave and once there we stood there both alittle hesitant to go in due to the legend behind it. Now at this point dear readers you maybe wondering what the legend is, well they say years ago in the cave there were these three adventurers who went in there but one killed one of them with a rock due to findingout he was cheating with his girlfriend but was then killed by having a flair shot in his face over a ledge to his death and they say the ghosts still haunt the cave. 

When my brother and i went in the cave was dark as night we could only see by using the light of our phones. "is anyone here?" i asked as my voiced echoed off the walls of the cave, only to get no response back but we kept on going. Me and my brother trecked on climbing thru little caverns and going down drops and other risky ledges but then around 20 minutes in as my brother was getting annoyed with me and demanding we leave, we finally experienced something, upon my last DEMAND of the spirits to show me something a huge rock was thrown nailing my brother in the face knocking him over like a falling tree. As my brother fell to the ground echoes of screams came deep from within the cave which frightened both me and my brother, and as the screams grew louder and louder as multiple rocks were thrown, my brother demanded it to stop only to recieve anyother b-slap to the face with a rock.

This gave me a idea on how to communicate "did you die by your hiking buddy?, if yes throw a rock at my brother" and then a rock was thrown nailing my brother in the face. "screw you man" my brother said spitting blood onto the cave floor "good, good, did you do the killing, if yes throw a rock at my brother" but no rock was thrown, "are you angery we are in your cave?" and a rock was thrown at my brother again nailing him in the face falling on his back, "ok we will leave" i said and at this point i helped my brother up (who's nose looked like a bleeding deflaited bloon) and we both left the cave, went down the cliff, accross the dried river, and into his car and drove off. 

you know I enjoyed the hunt and I will definitley be doing more in the future, and i hope you all enjoyed reading my first hunt.

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