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The Ash Mirror

The Ash Mirror is a psychological horror novel that follows Syra Hale, a grieving mother drawn to a haunted, reality-warping hotel room where a mysterious mirror forces her to confront the buried trauma of her daughter’s death. As the mirror unveils nightmarish visions and manipulates time and memory, Syra must navigate shifting dimensions, face distorted versions of herself, and ultimately decide whether she will be consumed by her past—or transformed by it.

May 2, 2025  |   34 min read
The Ash Mirror
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Chapter 5

The night was never truly silent in Briarwood. It was a place filled with whispers - the kind that lurked just beyond the edge of hearing, teasing the senses, scraping at the back of the mind. As Syra lay in the bed, the weight of the mirror's gaze still lingering on her skin, she could feel the whispers. They weren't just in the walls. They were in the air, in the very fibers of her being.

She turned restlessly beneath the thin blanket, her mind racing. The journal had opened new doors, but each page she turned revealed something darker, more disorienting. Something ancient and insidious that tied her to Briarwood, to the mirror, to the Rite of Ash. The threads were pulling tighter, binding her in ways she couldn't yet understand.

Outside, the wind howled, shaking the windows, making the room feel even more like a prison. The faint smell of burning wood clung to the air, a reminder of the fire that had consumed her past. The fire that had taken her daughter.

She shut her eyes tightly, willing the memories to go away, but they always returned. The screams. The heat. The taste of ash in her mouth. She could feel it again now - an invisible presence, like smoke rising from the corners of the room, creeping toward her. She could hear it, too. The whispering, barely audible, almost drowned out by the howling wind.

"Syra..."

The voice was familiar but distant, like a dream she couldn't quite grasp. She sat up, her heart pounding in her chest. Was someone here? No. She was alone. But the voice persisted, this time clearer, like it was coming from inside her own head.

"Syra... the Rite of Ash... it begins now."

Her body froze. The words were a command, not a suggestion. They echoed through her mind, reverberating in the walls of the room, as if the very air were speaking to her. The Rite of Ash. She had read about it in the journal. The ritual that would allow her to see the truth, but at a terrible cost.

She had to do it. The whisper told her so. But deep down, she feared what she would find. What truths the ritual would reveal. She was being pulled into something darker, something older than herself, and she didn't know if she was ready to face it.

Before she could think further, the whispering stopped abruptly. Silence. Heavy. Oppressive. Her breath seemed too loud, too intrusive in the stillness.

And then the door creaked open.

Her heart skipped a beat. She didn't move. She didn't even breathe. The door had been locked. No one could have gotten in.

But there it was - the faintest crack in the door, just wide enough for a sliver of moonlight to spill across the floor.

Syra slowly swung her legs over the edge of the bed and stood, her bare feet cold on the wooden floor. She took a step forward, the floor creaking beneath her weight, and then another. Her pulse raced in her throat.

She reached for the door, but before she could touch it, something cold brushed against her skin - a chill that stole her breath away. She spun around, but there was nothing. The room was empty. The window was shut tight. There was no draft.

Still, the temperature had dropped. The air was thick with a weight she couldn't explain.

She took a deep breath and opened the door.

The hallway beyond was dimly lit, its walls lined with faded portraits of faces long forgotten. The air smelled musty, like old leather and dust. The house was quiet now, save for the wind whispering through the cracks in the walls. But it wasn't the quiet that unsettled her - it was the stillness. There was something wrong with the air, a heaviness that clung to everything, like the house itself was holding its breath, waiting for something to happen.

And then, as if in response to her thoughts, a sound echoed from down the hallway. A soft shuffle. A dragging noise, like something - or someone - moving across the floor.

Syra's stomach turned. She stepped into the hallway, her footsteps tentative, and began to walk toward the source of the sound.

The closer she got, the more intense the sense of dread became. She could feel it crawling up her spine, prickling her skin, urging her to turn back. But she couldn't. She had to know.

At the end of the hallway, she saw it.

A door. Slightly ajar, but not the door to the room she had just left. This door was different. Older. Covered in intricate carvings - symbols she recognized, but couldn't quite place.

The dragging sound grew louder, and she pushed the door open.

Inside was a large, circular room. The walls were lined with bookshelves, filled with dusty tomes and ancient scrolls. In the center of the room stood an enormous stone basin, its surface cracked and worn with age. The basin was filled with water, but it wasn't clear. It was thick, viscous, like blood.

And standing in front of it was a figure, cloaked in shadow, their face hidden by a hood.

Syra's heart pounded in her chest as the figure turned toward her, its presence like a black hole, pulling at the very air around her. The figure didn't speak, but she felt its gaze - cold, calculating.

"You've come for the Rite," the figure said, its voice distorted, like it was coming from deep underwater.

Syra's throat tightened. She couldn't speak. She wanted to run, but her legs wouldn't move. The figure stepped forward, and in the dim light, she saw its hand - the fingers elongated, the nails sharp like claws. It reached toward her, and she couldn't look away.

"It's already begun," the figure said, its voice like a whisper in her mind. "You cannot escape it now."

Syra felt her knees go weak. The room seemed to tilt, and the floor beneath her feet began to crack open. She reached out, but it was too late. The shadowy figure was already upon her, its hand closing around her wrist, dragging her toward the basin.

The water swirled in the basin, thickening, darkening as the figure murmured words in a language Syra didn't understand. The air grew heavier, suffocating, as the room seemed to close in on her.

And then, the shadows consumed her.

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