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Surprise

Oct 1, 2012 | 4 min read

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David Isidoro

Oct 5, 2012

Decent. Vocab was well planned and executed, story is kind of unique, but too short. A good story needs to have geniune and vivid details, which i wish you had more of. Your story is like how you describe guys to be like, ”heated” and ”urgent” when making

Oct 4, 2012

devilishly clever...Happy Halloween!

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