I really appreciate the way you described the character.... Good attempt....keep it up

I totally agree with Ruhani...really its a nice story and teaches us a good lesson. :)

Amazing. really enjoyed it. :)

i like the moral of the story

NIce story!!!!

its a nice moral lesson as how we can control our anger that is the biggest enemy of a man. nice story Dilip..:)

a good inspirational story... liked it..:)