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Crimson Vigil

Lucien Vale, a vampire night guard, has spent centuries hiding from his own emotions and dangerous instincts. When he saves Aria, a fierce woman caught in a deadly situation, he is forced to confront the vulnerability she awakens in him. As danger looms closer, Lucien must protect her while struggling to control his darker nature. Along the way, he discovers the power of love and emotional rebirth, ultimately learning that embracing his humanity might be the key to saving them both.

May 4, 2025  |   6 min read

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Hema Priya
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The city always smelled like rust, smoke, and secrets after midnight.

Lucien Vale stood still on the rooftop, black eyes sweeping over the skeletal ruins of the south district. Rain drizzled lightly, softening the chaos below. Down the street, neon signs blinked in exhaustion, casting fractured colors over cracked sidewalks and abandoned storefronts. Humans didn't come here unless they had to. That was what made it perfect.

He heard the scream before the sound actually hit the air.

His body responded before his mind did, muscles tense, legs coiled like a predator mid-pounce. Lucien moved - no thought, no hesitation, just instinct honed by centuries of shadow-drenched survival. In less than a breath, he was off the roof, falling silently through the wet night, and landing on the cracked pavement behind five men trying to shove a woman into the back of a black van.

The scent of her fear hit him first, sharp and citrusy. But underneath it - something else. Something he hadn't felt in over a hundred years.

Warmth. Real, human warmth.

Lucien didn't ask questions.

He moved like death. One broke beneath his elbow. Another gasped before his spine met Lucien's knee. The third managed a slash of his blade before Lucien grabbed the wrist and bent it backward until bone snapped like a twig. The fourth tried to run. He didn't make it past two steps.

Only the driver remained, frozen in place, his mouth opening and closing in silent terror. Lucien bared his fangs, eyes glowing like molten gold in the dark.

"Leave."

The man dropped his keys and ran into the night.

Lucien exhaled slowly. The fight had lasted maybe six seconds.

Then he turned to her.

She stood there, not cowering, not trembling. Her hoodie was ripped, one cheek scratched, but her eyes - those eyes burned like wildfire. She was furious, not afraid. Alive in a way Lucien could feel in the marrow of his bones.

"Are you alright?" he asked, voice low and rough like gravel.

"You're not human," she said, still panting, blood at the corner of her lip. "You moved like... like something out of a nightmare."

Lucien didn't respond.

"You gonna hurt me too?" she challenged, stepping closer. Stupid. Reckless. Beautiful.

"No," he growled. "But you should go."

"I should thank you first. Name's Aria."

He didn't answer.

She tilted her head, eyes narrowing. "What's yours?"

He hesitated. "Lucien."

"Well, Lucien," she smirked, "you're either an avenging angel or the devil in disguise."

Then it hit him - her scent again. It made his fangs ache, not with hunger, but with something dangerously close to longing. She smelled like sunlight, like something he was never meant to touch. And worse - he felt something strange and unwelcome crawling across his skin.

Weakness.

The moment she got close, his power dipped. Just slightly - but enough.

He left her that night. Vanished before she could say more. But he didn't stop watching.

Night after night, he found himself drawn to her window. Her apartment sat above an old tattoo studio. She painted late into the night - wild, angry strokes, always barefoot, always humming something that made him ache. Sometimes, she'd glance toward the window like she knew he was there. Sometimes, she'd leave the curtain open.

She didn't run from shadows. She invited them in.

The weakness spread. Every time he was near her, his strength thinned. But Lucien couldn't stay away.

He wasn't used to desire anymore. He'd burned through that a hundred years ago, left it buried in dirt and regret. But Aria lit a fire in him he didn't remember how to extinguish.

And she knew it.

She began visiting the mall where he worked. Late. Always alone. Sometimes with coffee, sometimes with sass. Lucien tried to keep it cold, but she saw through it. She asked too many questions. She leaned in too close. She traced her fingers along the back of his hand, testing him.

"Why don't you ever blink?" she'd asked once, too casually.

He'd just stared. She didn't back down.

Then came the night the creatures came for her.

He should have expected it. Other things in the dark had sensed his weakness, the drop in his aura. A rival vampire? A rogue demon? He didn't know, didn't care.

What he remembered was the scream.

He arrived at her apartment in time to see two cloaked figures dragging her down the stairwell. She fought like hell. He fought harder.

The hallway became a war zone - blood splattering walls, claws slashing, Lucien's strength burning through his body like fire. He won - but barely.

By the time he carried her back inside, he was bleeding from a gash across his chest. She was shaking.

"You're hurt," she whispered, brushing a trembling hand over his ribcage. "You saved me again."

"Don't thank me," he rasped. "You... make me weak."

She blinked. "Then why do you keep coming back?"

"I don't know," he breathed.

She stood on her toes and kissed him.

It wasn't sweet. It was raw. Urgent. Her fingers curled into his shirt, his blood smearing her wrists. She pressed her mouth to his, and Lucien - Lucien groaned like a dying man and kissed her back.

Their bodies collided like flint and flame.

He slammed her against the wall. Her legs wrapped around him, pulling him closer. Their lips bruised, tongues tangled, hands grabbed. He could feel her heartbeat like a drum inside his own chest.

"I could lose control," he gasped against her throat.

"Then don't be gentle," she whispered.

He froze. His fangs grazed her skin. She arched into him. Every part of him wanted her - wanted to taste her, to take her, to make her his in a way no man ever had.

But he stopped.

He stepped back, breathing ragged.

"I can't. If I mark you - if I take your blood - you'll never be the same."

She approached slowly. Her shirt was torn. Her chest rose and fell rapidly. Her lips were kiss-bruised.

"Maybe I don't want to be the same," she said.

Lucien left her in the dark.

He fought the enemy again days later - this time worse. They knew about her now. They wanted her.

In a final brutal showdown in the underground tunnels, Lucien killed the last of them. But he was broken - on his knees, torn open. She found him there, slumped against the wall.

"You're not dying on me," she said, dragging his arm over her shoulder. "Not after everything."

"You should be afraid of me," he murmured, barely conscious.

"I'm not," she said. "I've never felt safer."

When she got him home, she sat beside him on the bed. He reached for her wrist.

"I need to feed. Just enough," he warned.

She gave it to him willingly.

He fed - slow, careful, reverent. Her blood hit his tongue like sunlight through stained glass. He moaned. She gasped. Their eyes locked as he pulled back, the taste of her still on his lips.

"You're part of me now," he whispered. "You don't get to walk away."

"I never planned to," she said, pulling off her clothes one piece at a time.

There were no more warnings.

He kissed every inch of her body, worshipped her with hands and mouth and soul. She arched into him, whispered his name like a prayer. They moved together, fierce and tender, letting years of loneliness and longing melt into skin and sweat and ecstasy.

It wasn't just steamy - it was sacred.

When they collapsed, tangled and breathless, the rain had stopped. The city outside was quiet. His hand found hers beneath the sheets.

"You make me feel alive again," he said.

Aria smiled, tracing his jaw. "Then stay alive for me."

He nodded.

And as the sun began to rise, Lucien Vale, the vampire who had once feared the light, held the woman who changed everything and whispered -

"They said monsters burn in the sun. But with you beside me... I welcome the fire."

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