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A Night in Tiwi

A Night in Tiwi by Mac Belenzo is a gripping and thought-provoking short story set in the quiet town of Tiwi, Albay, known for its hot springs and the looming presence of Mayon Volcano. The story follows 17-year-old Andrea, a high school senior with dreams of becoming a journalist, and her best friend, Lila, as they navigate a town grappling with victim-blaming and flawed anti-rape campaigns. After Andrea becomes the victim of a violent assault, Lila takes a stand against the local police's misguided approach to victim prevention. Fueled by grief and rage, Lila advocates for a shift in focus, from victim-blaming to holding perpetrators accountable. Through Lila's courage and the community’s support, Tiwi undergoes a transformation, ultimately creating a safer and more empowering environment for its residents. A Night in Tiwi is a powerful exploration of justice, courage, and the collective fight against sexual violence.

Jan 25, 2025  |   4 min read
A Night in Tiwi
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Tiwi, Albay - a quiet town known for its hot springs, scenic coastal roads, and the ever-imposing shadow of Mayon Volcano - was home to a mix of bustling daily life and peaceful nights. Among its residents was Andrea, a vivacious 17-year-old high school senior with dreams of becoming a journalist. Her best friend, Lila, admired Andrea's confidence and unwavering passion for the truth. Together, they often hung out by the beach near Joroan Church or wandered the quaint streets, dreaming of a brighter future.

Lila, however, harbored a simmering frustration. She had grown increasingly vocal about the victim-focused anti-rape campaigns promoted by local police. Recently, a series of posts on social media by the Tiwi PNP had sparked her anger: a list of tips advising women to avoid walking alone at night, to dress modestly, and to avoid drinking in public. The tone, Lila felt, placed the responsibility of avoiding harm squarely on potential victims, not perpetrators.

"They make it sound like it's our job to not get raped," Lila said, slamming her phone on the caf� table. Andrea, sipping her iced coffee, nodded in agreement.

"They're missing the point," Andrea replied. "But it's hard to make them see that. People just... don't want to face the uncomfortable truth."

One humid evening, Andrea decided to visit her grandmother, who lived in a barrio near the geothermal plant. Lila, tied up with family errands, couldn't join her. Andrea assured her it was fine.

"Don't worry," Andrea said with a playful smirk. "I'll follow all the PNP's tips - modest clothes, no shortcuts, and a lot of praying."

Lila frowned but let it go. She knew Andrea could handle herself.

As Andrea made her way home after dinner, the once-familiar path felt eerie. The coconut trees lining the dirt road cast long, wavering shadows under the dim moonlight. She gripped her phone tightly, her heart racing at the faint sound of footsteps behind her. The footsteps quickened. So did hers. Before she could react, a man lunged from the darkness.

Andrea fought back with every ounce of strength she had, screaming for help, but the remote location worked against her. The man overpowered her, and despite her resistance, Andrea became a victim of the very crime she and Lila had spoken about.

The news of Andrea's assault sent shockwaves through Tiwi. At first, the usual whispers filled the air: "Why was she walking alone at night?" "Wasn't she wearing shorts that day?" "She should have known better."

Lila's grief turned to rage. At a community meeting held near the town plaza, she stood up to confront the police officers promoting their usual campaign.

"My best friend did everything you told us to do," Lila said, her voice shaking but resolute. "She avoided dark alleys, dressed modestly, and stayed alert. And yet, here we are. Andrea followed your rules, but where were you when she needed protection? Why aren't you telling men not to rape?"

Her words silenced the murmurs. Even some of the townsfolk who initially blamed Andrea began to reflect.

Determined to honor Andrea's courage, Lila organized a town forum, inviting residents, police, and representatives from women's advocacy groups. The event was held in the Tiwi Sports Complex, drawing a crowd larger than anyone anticipated.

Lila began with a powerful speech: "Rape is not a crime of opportunity; it's a crime of power and control. No amount of precautions can stop a predator determined to harm. The focus should be on holding these criminals accountable, not controlling how we live our lives."

She highlighted the systemic failures that allowed predators to thrive: inadequate patrols, lack of public education on consent, and a culture that normalized victim-blaming. Her presentation included data from other communities that successfully reduced sexual violence by focusing on predator accountability and societal education.

Moved by the presentation, Chief Inspector Villanueva, head of the local PNP, approached Lila after the event.

"You're right," he admitted. "Our campaigns have been misguided. We need to rethink our approach."

Over the next few months, Tiwi saw a transformation. The PNP launched a new campaign titled "No Means No," emphasizing respect for consent and promoting education for both men and women. They conducted workshops in schools, teaching young people about healthy relationships and boundaries. Patrols were increased in high-risk areas, and citizens were encouraged to report suspicious behavior without fear of reprisal.

Local businesses joined the cause, funding community watch programs and installing better lighting in poorly lit areas. Barangay officials partnered with advocacy groups to create a reporting hotline, ensuring swift responses to incidents.

Andrea's story became the centerpiece of the campaign. Her family, despite their grief, supported the movement, hoping no one else would have to endure such pain. "She always wanted to make a difference," Andrea's mother said at one of the workshops. "And now, through all of you, she is."

One evening, Lila found herself sitting by the beach near Joroan Church, staring at the waves crashing against the rocks. She thought of Andrea - her laughter, her dreams, her courage.

"This is for you," she whispered, a tear sliding down her cheek. "And for everyone else who deserves to feel safe, to live without fear."

The fight for justice was far from over, but Lila knew she wouldn't stop until every voice was heard and every victim's story mattered.

Months turned into years, and Tiwi became a model for other towns. The once-silent streets now buzzed with activity, not just from patrols but from empowered residents uniting for a safer community. Survivors of assault found their voices, sharing their stories in support groups and forums, knowing they were no longer alone.

Lila, now pursuing a degree in social work, continued to advocate for systemic change, reminding everyone that the fight against sexual violence required collective effort. She often revisited the beach, where she found solace and strength, carrying Andrea's spirit with her.

Andrea's dream of becoming a journalist might never have been realized, but her story ignited a revolution in Tiwi - a testament to the power of truth and the enduring fight for justice.

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