Mystery

A Girl About Colorado the Revenge of Melissa James

There was something inside of Melissa that snapped that day. She vowed to take revenge on anyone who had hurt, used, or abused her. Solve the riddle in the note to find the location of Mark Saint James, may he RIP. Clue: Denver, CO the Mile High City.

Sep 6, 2023 | 4 min read

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Dessie Hairston

Sep 13, 2023

The name is a little long it would be better if it said The revenge of Melissa James and then as we read along it specified that she lived in Colorado and was angry at everyone who'd wronged her. The story lacked dialogue and didn't really keep my interes

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Shang Jones

Sep 18, 2023

Thank you for the feedback.

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Nicole

Sep 7, 2023

Amazing! I was so ready to continue reading. Great start to this story!!!

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Shang Jones

Sep 18, 2023

Thank you for the positive feedback. More to come.

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