awesome one. brilliant reasoning !!! keep it up sir
i like the moral of the story
thank you so much
Sure thing Aubree. Happy writing.
For Barnett: The first few paragraphs are in present tense. Then it suddenly switches past tense. Then onwards, there's a mix of past and present. There's no harm in healthy criticism. Right?
The sentence structure seems to swing haphazardly between present tense and past tense. Not that I'm a perfect writer myself, but there should have been a stable sentence structure. Good effort none the less.
A lot of lines in the early paragraphs started with "He"s. But the last paragrapgh was awesome
awesome. reminded me one of the stories from edgar allan poe
the way all the minute details have been explained is shrewd. good writing
thank u all. each and every word of ur appreciation is dear 2 me.
actually i don't hav a son in real life. i'm just 26. thanks 4 da appreciation.