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A Game of Shadows
Hello, I just finished reading your story, and I absolutely adored it! Your writing is incredible, and I couldn’t stop imagining how fantastic it would look as a comic. I’m a professional commissioned artist, and I’d be thrilled to adapt your story into a comic format. No pressure, of course. I just think your work would shine in that medium. If you’re interested, feel free to reach out to me on Discord (lizziedoesitall). Let me know your thoughts! Best, Lizzie
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A Game of Shadows
First off, i love the cover for this story!Second! You seem to have a very good idea of what you want for your story. A tale of accidental romance, and running from mafioso's. But there is one thing I think that needs to be worked on, and that's the pacing. Everything happens so fast, we don't really have time for actual character development. But keep going! Like I said at the beginning, you have a great set for a story here. Just needs a bit more character development. : D
Rebecca Church