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A Game of Shadows
First off, i love the cover for this story!Second! You seem to have a very good idea of what you want for your story. A tale of accidental romance, and running from mafioso's. But there is one thing I think that needs to be worked on, and that's the pacing. Everything happens so fast, we don't really have time for actual character development. But keep going! Like I said at the beginning, you have a great set for a story here. Just needs a bit more character development. : D
Rebecca Church